Trust In Me (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 7, 2004

Lori,
I've never written satire and yet the more I read your work the more I enjoy the style with which you carry this off. Excellent and a lot of truth behind the words.

Sherry

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on August 2, 2004

how intense this is...
great poem!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 31, 2004

...Funny how the more these guys ask you to trust in them, the more one's suspicion is further roused instead...but, like moths to the flame, our intrigue gets the better of us and we can seldom actually resist what we know will probably be bad for us!! Seems like we sometimes need change rather than progression. Neat write, Lori - trust me!! Thanks, Kate xx

Reviewed by Reginald Birch (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2004

Clever poem Lori, politics seem to be the same all over the world.
Reg.

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on July 30, 2004

Powerful poem. This is what every candidate tells to people during elections. Thanks Lori

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2004

This is a terrific write, Lori, and I agree with Ted all the way�lol. So I do take it you�re not voting for Kerry this time around???�lol. Outstanding work, Poet. Thanks for sharing your remarkable talent.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on July 29, 2004

This is great, Lori! Go right on!

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2004

This should be hung in the HQ of the DNC right next to Kerry's head.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 29, 2004

Nicely put together in a neat package Lori
You say it all

Peter Paton

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

Lori, you have a natural knack for expressing the outlook and mindset ff the political perspective with expertise and insight ...

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

You are a real pro at this! keep up the good work!!

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle (Reader)

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

So, Lori, were you ever in politics!?! ...You have the "charm" depicted quite well!!! ...LOL! ...Another excellent political satire, Dear Poet! I really enjoyed this! Thanks for sharing it!

Cynthia

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

whoa!!!

hard choices we have here.....
at least we have choices and are not stuck with a king! lol
pax a

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

A most powerful write, Lori.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

I trust you all the way Lori......

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

Lori I vote for you! You have the "eyes that see" the farce
of those who tell you they feel your pain! Yeah sure! all the way to the presidency!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

I'll Trust Your Intellectuality!

TRASK

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

(((lori)))

hear, hear! i don't trust very many...especially politicos on their high horses and high mansions *while the masses starve grrrrrrr*

get me to talking...LOL

excellent, i adore your satire! more, more, more!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

and the flock follows the lead of another Pied piper who spews goodwill towards man but can't offer an iota of proof. Guess I'll step down from my soapbox now. I love the political fire poetry can throw at us during an election year. It gives us an alternative to the crap they twist out during convention time. great poem. I just love it!!!!
Susan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

Yes powerful indeed Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

Powerful Powerful Lori!!!!!!....{{Smiles}}}}
Missed you....

LP