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Haiku - A Set of Seven
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rhythmic brush strokes-
snow geese paint the sky
white on blue

late night chill-
after the fight
her expression

morning frost-
kissed by the moon
her shadow

deep winter-
beneath the ice
spring sleeps

outside the tavern-
a faithful dog
in a rusty truck

foggy morning-
empty bottles
line the counter

april nineteenth-
pockets picked
by an acronym

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 Reviews of "Haiku - A Set of Seven"
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 23, 2005
I love the way you always have a sparkling, tender thread lacing your sets of ku together - and I find this bunch particularly so: they're pristine, like a fresh, winter's morning. I find the first particularly moving. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on February 23, 2005
I liked these a lot. Great!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2005
I love three.......but they're all divine.

Clever lady...

Always a great pleasure Lori....hi btw....and good to read you again...

Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
5 and 6 really made me smile, Lori. But these were all beautiful as always.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Hail the haiku Priestess! As the story unfolds, so the verses tumble into each other. That last verse, though, bends the mind, and comes from a very creative place! katy xox.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Wonderful Lori......

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Beautiful haiku...

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Soothingly you. I needed this. Me been frazzled lately. :-) Thanks Lori.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Luurve to see a snow goose.
Is great to see you writing again.
And with such good form..

Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Lori,

You are the ku master, practicing the art of perfection in so few words--thank you, these are GORGEOUS!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Like them all!!

Well done Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
It really is good to see you back. These are all excellent. Number 5 was the most emotional to me. I am a dog lover since birth.

Reviewed on February 22, 2005
The Queen of Ku's makes it hard to decide on a fave.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
I did, I really did try to pick a favorite. Didn't work though. I like them all!
You have the gift of Ku!

Lisa

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Welcome back, Lori, I have missed reading you. Your Haiku are, as always, great. I love each of them but my favorites are 1, 4, and 5. The dog in the truck Ku really painted an image as well as the geese. I hope to see more from Moore in the future.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
As usual Lori you do haiku so well there is hardly any need to comment other then to say keep it up we love you.

hugs,
Felix

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
I really enjoyed these. I especially like the imagery of Late Night Chill and Deep Winter. Good Job, Lori

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 21, 2005
A beautiful group of ku Lori, I especially love 1 and 4 "beneath the ice sleeps spring" fantastic line;-)have missed you;-)!
Eileen

Reviewed on February 21, 2005
These were great Haiku's keep it up
God Bless
Michelle!


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