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My, My, My
by Lori L Moore → (All Poetry by Lori L Moore)
  
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My breath is short
As short as my skirt
But not as my temper

My heart is hard
As hard as my life
But not as your love

My tongue is sharp
As sharp as steel
Upon your member

My mind is clear
As clear as Striesand's day
But not as clear as your need

My life is real
As real as my medication
Allows it to be...

My time is over...

I am on my way to Central America for a few days... I'll miss you all.

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 Reviews of "My, My, My"
Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on January 7, 2003
my, my,...a simple yet abundant explanation of self...

Reviewed by Afrika Abney
Reviewed on September 27, 2002
Nice write.Thanks for sharing

Afrika

Reviewed by Cles Wilson
Reviewed on August 30, 2002
Excellent. Hope you have a safe trip and a good time.

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on August 19, 2002
excellent...hope you enjoy your trip!

Reviewed by liz zemanek
Reviewed on August 17, 2002

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2002
Take care and hurry back...

Reviewed by Deja
Reviewed on August 16, 2002

Reviewed by Peter Adotey Addo
Reviewed on August 16, 2002
Hope you have time to write on your trip....

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Reviewed by Ricky Martin
Reviewed on August 15, 2002
Beware the lollipop of mediocrity. Lick it once and you suck forever.

Reviewed by Jim Smith (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2002
A quick hitter...Try to relax, but don't lose that edge out there on vacation.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2002
I love the sharp tongue on the member.. with a crisp, brief style, you have spoken volumes.. do have fun on your trip.. hurry back.katy.

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2002
My ... My ... My ... Friend ... its really wondeerful .. u did this so beeautiifully .. we miss u and ur poems .. hope u get back to us soon with lot of flowrs and lot of happiness .. Keeep smiling always ...

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Reviewed on August 12, 2002
Great poem! Hope you have (or had) fun!!! Love, Silver

Reviewed on August 12, 2002
Excellent Write. Have a great time while away.

Reviewed by J. Murphy
Reviewed on August 12, 2002
I love the way that you weave three different things into a succeeding progression of thought.
Have a great trip!
J.

Reviewed by Chris Stevens (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2002
a wonderful write Lori!!!... I hope you have a great trip!!!!!
hugs,
Chris

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on August 12, 2002
bon voyage
enjoy
josie

Reviewed on August 12, 2002
TERRIFIC write! love your talent...but...we're gonna miss you!! >cries < have a great, safe, relaxing vacation, and can't wait to see you back on AD! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on August 12, 2002
Love this Lori!!!!! I have to tell you, you nailed it with this.."My life is real
As real as my medication
Allows it to be..." Have a wonderful journey! I can't wait to read your new work, when you come back!!!! I always look forward to your poetry! Safe trip cutie!

Big Hugs,
Maria
xoxoxo

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 12, 2002
Great write Lori,,,you will be missed terribly,,but we sure hope you enjoy your trip! Be careful and hurry back! Lisa

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on August 12, 2002
Have a wonderful time Lori , and hurry back! Take you pen and write a few poems on your trip! Good write!

Reviewed by m w
Reviewed on August 12, 2002
Have a glorious trip.

Reviewed by Dark Stranger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2002
your heart is gentle
your love pale blushed
tomorrow you will wear laughter

be safe ms

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2002
Wow...have a great time gurl I'm off to Oman myself in a few days.

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2002
{{{ LORI }}}
Be safe my friend. You'll be missed.

Love
Melanie

Reviewed by Larry Skahill
Reviewed on August 12, 2002
what a parting gift...take care...we shall wait for your return

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2002
Good work as always. Be safe and have fun, you will be missed!

Reviewed by Justin Wolf (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2002
Enjoy the time away, and we all await your return. Bravo.


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