Lori, you have hit the nail on the head with this write. Great imagery with the use of the vultures! Well done, nice flow and a great rhythm too. God Bless! Tim
this was excellent!!!!! the use of Vultures was great it creates the whole picture in your mind how they pick and pick away piece by piece. and the only come when the spirit is so close to death it can not fight back.
Blue eyed fish...
of empty words
and the pain of spoken daggers..." Oh Lori, you have no idea how true this is... Excellently written