You Color My Heart (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jo Janoski

Reviewed on February 15, 2004

"Like the sun on the water
you color my heart" -- I love these words.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on February 14, 2004

so beautiful. I sure have missed your work

Reviewed by Sandy Gem (Reader)

Reviewed on February 14, 2004

Stunning, really.

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)

Reviewed on February 13, 2004

Wonderfull.

Michael

Reviewed by Lisa Cannons (Reader)

Reviewed on February 12, 2004

Beautiful write Lori, and rev Trap is right... Love is the sweetest addiction of all....
Irish

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on February 11, 2004

I loved the ending of this one- love is such a risk, I hope to be brave enough to hang my heart:)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 11, 2004

Lori I am always mesmerized by your vivid poetry! Your word usage and expression is superior!This one rocks!;-)

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on February 11, 2004

Wonderfully expressive, girl...oh yes!

I envy your speaking so many languages...I can barely
get by with street stuff, in spanish, and would love
to learn Italian (my heritage language).

Keep up the fine writing.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 11, 2004

Beautiful write!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 11, 2004

Lori this is so gorgeous...love each and every well written
heartfelt line....floria

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on February 11, 2004

Oh this is beautiful really enjoyed reading tjis...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on February 11, 2004

Very splendidly crafted and written

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 11, 2004

Love me, until my unbelieving heart
believes in love again

Powerfully penned, Lori.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on February 11, 2004

This is one of the best poems I have read,indeed...a masterpiece.

Reviewed by M Flack

Reviewed on February 11, 2004

Great write...

"and I am willing to die
for the sweetness of your addiction"

Love truly is the sweetest addiction of all...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 11, 2004

A nice flow of words describing passion unfulfilled and desperation to have that passion sated.

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on February 11, 2004

Quite a conversion documented, from unbelieving to believer!

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on February 11, 2004

Interesting piece.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 11, 2004

Very creative Lori..
I like the way you color...