Ethereal Melody (poem) by Melissa C. Rives on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on March 18, 2007

There is nothing lacking in your craft. You interweave lines so artfully.
Amor

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1

Reviewed on March 18, 2003

Yeah! Awesome!
10+++

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 14, 2003

Such a beautiful poem! I love the images you created here, just wonderful!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

You've created some very nice visuals here Melissa! ~Joseph

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

You just get better and better....beautiful Melissa!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

Melissa, another beautiful poem. You trully captivated the beauty of writing.

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

Beautiful imagery, excellent write...a treasure.

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

Where leaves of wisdom sway within
The breeze of cherubs passing by…
A symphony within their wings
Sings softly ‘neath the velvet sky.

gorgeous, absolutely gorgeous. I could feel the breeze and hear the symphony.

Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

wonderful thoughts there dear poet. i agree with the last stanza...

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

Melissa, this is so lovely

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

the universal eye renews and revitalizes us... great write!

Reviewed by D. Fitzpatrick (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

Word choices are good. Good flow amd meter.
You have a real poem! Thank's for your review of mine. D.L.

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

nice movement and rhythm...**Mari**

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

"Where jewel-studded teardrops dare
To light the heavens with their dance"
Your lines are fantastic Melissa..and they sure do drive away depressions curse...lovely lovely poem that flows..brilliant work..floria

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

Very well done, and the title is so fitting.
-James

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

Poetry like this is why I first started to write...your work illicits the magical mystery of a poem...;0(

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

This is just magically awesome
cause you did it......

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

There is magic in your words, and so lovely
~E