Shrouds of Whether... (poem) by Cryssa C on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 3, 2008

This one has me feeling sad for you...hope you're doing well. Spring will come(I look outside at rain) soon I hope.

WRP

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on April 30, 2008

It will come for you are a ray of sunshine. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Very good, Cryssa.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on April 27, 2008

This is why I moved to Florida 28 years ago. I got tired of the cold and the anticipation for warmer sunshiny days. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

I liked the question you asked at the end Whether? Pondering your sadness and questioning such a wonderful sage write. Liz

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

nice play on the word weather whether... yup i was ripped of by the salesman, my head gasket blew within a few miles, 500 quid or 1000 dollars to repair... However, thanks to police help and a stern letter said in a nice way, he's footing the bill. I drove over 100 miles at 40 mph due to overheating, before that it was the normal 120.... xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

Perfection!!

Lov etinka

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

What a perfect write for one who feels gloomy...spring will kiss your heart and bring life to it again

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

A wonderful write my friend...written with heart and compassion, you've penned it with excellence! Great imagery! Thank you for stopping by my den today, you're welcome anytime! I enjoyed your review of Fingerprints of Time! By the way, my mom did the samething that your dad did, I too didn't want to make a choice as this was planning her departure! I'm not ready for that!
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

Even the weather here in Italy has been changeable this past week or so, but it appears to be on the mend. Cheer up Cryssa...spring will be here before you know it!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

Whether or not weather can effect us all.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

mood piece that defines your yearning for the seasonal change.
we are all affected by weather even though we don't always know it;-)

ET

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

I like this... fits my mood. What ever happened to global WARMING??? I could really use it about now....!! --Charlie

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

You ring justice to all the unweather we have all been experiencing lately, so harsh, so violent, and not wanting to leave....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

Deffo a Stormspinner kind of write, Cryssa; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

You wrote this with the StormSpinner in mind, didn'y ya, Cryssa? The weather can - and does - affect one's mood - I'd rather have the winter than the springtime storms! Had some today, more expected tomorrow afternoon/night/Sunday morning, maybe by next Wednesday and Thursday - ENOUGH, already!!!!!!! Excellent setting of mood with incredible imagery - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.