MY LOVE THE SEA (poem) by Raymond v Morrow on AuthorsDen

MY LOVE THE SEA
by Raymond v Morrow → (All Poetry by Raymond v Morrow)
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. THE SEA IS MY LOVER WHO WELCOMES ME TO HER BREAST HOW JOYFUL HER SIREN SONG ENTICING ME TO REST. WHEN THE SONG WAS OVER HER MASSIVE WAVES WET THE SKY. WITH SCREAMS SHE TORE AT MY SHIP DESPERATE FOR ME TO DIE. WHEN I SURVIVED HER STORM THE SEA SOFTLY MURMURED LOW. LOVE ME TRUST ME HOLD ME CLOSE. THEN I WILL LET YOU GO. I SMILED AT THIS LIE BUT MY HEART WILLED ME TO STAY. I KNEW SHE WOULD DESTROY ME AS SHE KISSED ME THAT DAY. I COULD�NT HELP MYSELF. MY GREAT PASSION FOR THE SEA HAS BEEN BURIED DEEP WITHIN ME FOR ETERNITY. RAYMOND MORROW
THE SEA IS MY LOVER WHO WELCOMES ME TO HER BREAST HOW JOYFUL HER SIREN SONG ENTICING ME TO REST. WHEN THE SONG WAS OVER HER MASSIVE WAVES WET THE SKY. WITH SCREAMS SHE TORE AT MY SHIP DESPERATE FOR ME TO DIE. WHEN I SURVIVED HER STORM THE SEA SOFTLY MURMURED LOW. LOVE ME TRUST ME HOLD ME CLOSE. THEN I WILL LET YOU GO. I SMILED AT THIS LIE BUT MY HEART WILLED ME TO STAY. I KNEW SHE WOULD DESTROY ME AS SHE KISSED ME THAT DAY. I COULD’NT HELP MYSELF. MY GREAT PASSION FOR THE SEA HAS BEEN BURIED DEEP WITHIN ME FOR ETERNITY. RAYMOND MORROW

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2008

Oh yes the beautiful ocean,,excellent writing sweet man...Hugss

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on March 3, 2008

Raymond,
This is a beautiful poem and a lovely metaphor in the comparision of the sea to a lover. Both can run wild; yet both, in a way, can also be tamed.
Best wishes,
Jill

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Going to the shore to see the sea tomorrow...was born and raised on its shore and will hopefully die within sight of old mom Ocean...ed

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Beautifully imaged, you take me to a place I love - thank you, Raymond.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

A powerful love of the powerful sea,, Excellent write.
Christine