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Club 57
by Sue Hess → (All Poetry by Sue Hess)
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She was pink hair, and punk, piercings galore
He was an everyday cowboy, nothing less, nothing more
She was giggle and bounce, in a fashionable sprawl
He was roll your own tobacco, with a slow texas drawl
She was wearing suede, feathers and glitter
He was in denim and hat when he came to sit with her
‘excuse me ma’am but could I ask for this dance’
polite, but not pushy, no hint of romance
her friends all twittered, ready for the put-down
almost fell from their chairs when she made not a sound
never taking her eyes from his face, she stood, tall and agile
but he took her hand and led her, like a lady so fragile
ignoring the fast tune with a funky rap beat
he pulled her close so their bodies could meet
leaning near, he kissed first one eye and then the other
nothing at all sexy, he kissed like her brother
but she felt it down to her platformed toes
she almost moaned when his lips brushed her nose
then with a finesse that blew her young mind
he swung into a dance of the funkiest kind
following the beat with moves that impressed her
while all of the time, his eyes they undressed her
nothing of her brother did he now remind her
her life as she new it was now far behind her
cause she knew before that dance was even half over
that she was trading her disco for fresh air and clover
as they left the club simply called '57'
the punk doll and the cowboy were a match
made in heaven

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 Reviews of "Club 57"
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on October 28, 2004
wonderful

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 24, 2004
Awesome poem Sue!
Funny and Witty write! Vewry neat
descriptions of the people too! I followed
along with every breath! You are a Fabulous
Poet!
Love,
Becca

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on October 23, 2004
wonderful write, as always. you do this form/style SO well! -- Jeff

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 23, 2004
Delightful tale, Sue. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2004
Oh! the first Love. It is wonderful. I loved this and it took me back to a time I can relate to. Thank you for the wonderful sweet romantic poem and the walk down memory lane.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on October 23, 2004
OUTSTANDING descriptive and inviting poem. I felt as though I was there. Great atmosphere and painted characters. Superb.
Susan

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 23, 2004
Just perfect - everything about this! The poetic rhythm and metre, the language, the element of surprise, the wry humour, the mood - everything! This is a keeper, Sue, thank you! You write with such pazazz and style, yet in a deceptively "easy" way. It must be a gift, because it is truly so unforced. This is a rare thing and would fall flat for many of us who might try and "culture" this kind of writing. Go you! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on October 22, 2004
Truly wonderful, Sue! Enjoyed it fully.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 22, 2004
Sue you write these look backs, and restore them to life! ;-)
Great writing!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 22, 2004
Sounds like quite a match, too!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2004
Pink hair is so conformist, don't you think? LOL

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on October 22, 2004
I always heard opposites attract. It's true..well in your poem anyway.
A good one it was too. I know where that club is!
Enjoyed Sue.

Lisa

Reviewed on October 21, 2004
This was wonderful, a sweet romantic poem! Loved it,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
very cool write

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
A cute write
What a unique couple they make.

Peace

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
the sign of good poetry is the ability to allow the reader to see and feel it's content and this you have done to perfection ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
Enjoyed this totally!

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
Enjoyed...But did her incestuous brother dance like a spaz.. :)

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
Romantically Good Funny Write!

TRASK


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