The One Hundred Word Challenge (poem) by Sue Hess on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on April 2, 2005

Fun to read=0). Great work, here.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 1, 2005

Yet another great challenge entry, Sue - seems to be lots of challenges around these days.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2005

An excellent read ... One of your best!

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on April 1, 2005

Sue, with the imagination you have..you could rule the world some day!
Nah....why would you want that headache? Just keep writing though..not only do you entertain but you inspire!

Lisa

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on April 1, 2005

Excellent Sue...i think this could become a trend lol...nice one

Paul;-]

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on April 1, 2005

Excellent response to the 100 word challenge Sue, had a great little turn in it at the end...enjoyed.

Allen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

Brilliant response with a lovely twist at the end!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

excellent 100 word character study ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

Sue you did this to perfection! Great work, love the end twist!

Eileen

Reviewed by KJ McPhee

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

good flow and character study.

Reviewed by Henry Stevens

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

I was really sold on this guy for you, what a harsh last line.....I'm sorry for you. Henry

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

well written.

but, can you rhyme " orange "?

TX

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

You have an amazing talent. With such a grasp of the english lingo..
I'm decked again..
You should go on a word show. Here we have countdown.
Maybe you have something similar.
Don't go on weakest link though..lol

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

Great write... with truths, that go both ways...

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

Great, Sue! This would make a good forward for a story...

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

its not a true poem, just trying to make a sketch of someone within the 100 word limit. i realized long ago to keep away from men who belong to other women. they look good but if you can get them, you don't want to and if you can't...why suffer and hurt someone else trying.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

Interesting and you did well on this challenge.

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

How heartbreaking sister Sue...I have had those longing myself, only to find he loved another. Oh well, such is life, I guess. Very good write, and I enjoyed every word of it. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy tot he world, peace on earth, & (((HUGS))), Barbie

"If I have to...Then I may as well be."