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I Play Around
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I admit it
I play around
I put it here
To see if it’s good
I move it there
To make it better
I take it all in
And say
Glpphm
Excuse me
I mean
I say is that nice
Or is this better
I play around
I freely admit
Words fascinate me
And how they make up a poem
Is even better
So I try one here
And move one there
Was it good for you
It is for me
Hmmmmm

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 Reviews of "I Play Around"
Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on May 25, 2005
It was good for me Sue, love playing around with words too...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on May 25, 2005
Quite cleverly written. You go, Sue! -- Jeff

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
play on Sue, splendid work

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Lol ... funny, playful and almost sensual. For a moment there, I was like "playing around ...?" Lol. Beautiful, Sue!

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Sue, how clever!It works for me;-)

Eileen

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Playful double entendre. Under the fun part lies some hard truth about wordsmithing.

Reviewed by Li Smith
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Bravo!

Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Ah, excellent! loved this!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 23, 2005
Oh yeah very good....the only way to do it..is to move!!

Love Tinka :)

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on May 23, 2005
I like playful.
Fun.
John

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 23, 2005
Splendid composition, in what wasn't said.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 23, 2005
words decorate our thoughts, playing around our emotions ...

yes this poem is good for me ...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 23, 2005
cute write Sue with your special sense of humour you are right on the mark with this one.
Felix

Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran
Reviewed on May 23, 2005
:) nice one!

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on May 23, 2005
You had me going Sue!!! Good write! Michelle


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