To You:This is a poem about sex,pain and love lost (poem) by Sue Hess on AuthorsDen

To You:This is a poem about sex,pain and love lost
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Okay in case any of you were suckered In by the pathetically obvious title, I guess I should write a poem My name is Sue I’m out walking the streets tonight Thinking about you and how you left me And how ….no scratch that, wrong poem I’m walking the streets, afraid to go home Because I can’t stand the pain Anymore Oh sure, in the beginning it was fun On the second or third date When the sex was getting old, I would bite you And you would slap me And I would curse you and you would spank me Just a normal courtship So we decided that we had too much to throw away And we moved in together Even the coat hangers were fun at first When I would hear the closet door open I would start stripping You laughed so hard that night you were just Hanging up the preachers coat The look on his face was priceless I’m glad it was your mother’s minister and not ours But those days were heaven The pain was good and we had such great crazy sex It made me wonder a little about myself And it made me dead Sure about you But that was part of being young and in love I even remember the first time You decided to heat the coat hanger Not because of the scars Or anything But I almost never got the plastic off the electric burner You aren’t stupid though baby You learned And when you would pull me across your lap Applying that hot coat hanger to my leather clad derriere Making me wiggle and squirm Well honey, those were the good old days So why am I walking the street Afraid of the pain, you ask? I haven’t figured that out yet but give me a second Ahh, now I got it The reason I am afraid to go home Is because I know the fire has gone out You no longer spank me The coat hangers Hang alone and forlorn In the hall closet And I go to Bed With a lily white ass And a broken heart
damn..i almost forgot the tag: Baby, I can't walk past a dry cleaners anymore without breaking down in tears, knowing that you just don't love me enough to hurt me anymore

Reviewed by Hanley Harding (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2002

Dear Sue; ...pretty weird, but... pretty interesting! Hanley

Reviewed by RON P KING

Reviewed on May 3, 2002

I GUESS ITS COOL IF YOU LIKE BONDAGE.

Reviewed by Gilles

Love it!
Blue eyed fish...

Reviewed by Scada (Reader)

Hmmm... couldn't have said it better myself.

Scada

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

first, i thought oh my---then i wanted to laugh(wrongpoem) then i thought oh my then i did laugh......then i thought Oh my
-smile-
very wonderful write!!!!

Reviewed by D. Enise

Reviewed on May 2, 2002

A~~~.. I was begining to wonder!. I am so happy you added an explination!! LOL
I was "speachless" about what to write here!!
You did however having me cracking up!!
I especially liked the "no scratch that,, wrong poem"! lol Not sure why, but it struck me!!
~Jen
~Jen

Reviewed by Alain Gracio

Sue!

Reviewed by michael

calling Dr. Frasier Crane.....

Reviewed by sue hess

oh my god, steve, i forgot everyone wouldn't be in on this one. go read john dempseys article and his poem 'for you'. this is just a spoof on that, nothing real. LOL

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

susieq-

don't know whether ta' laugh or cry on this one. damn sure never look at a coathanger the same though. interesting write. liked it though. specially the derriere part.:)-me
ps.-finally got my computor, now i can read.