I’ve been away
Deeply within myself looking
Hoping for redemption
Up close and personal
Attained from afar
Staying out of the grasp
Of dismal thinking
Skirting the edges of insanity
I’ve been away
In that land called introspection
Looking for peace
In a world filled with war
Looking for insight
While hiding my eyes
I’ve been away
Hiding from life, chaotic
While looking for peace
In myself
Deep within myself
Aw, give yourdelf a break. I've been there, it really isn't worth all the hell you putting yourself through. Smile. Everyone will wonder what the hell you up to.
Ah, I do not think it is pathetic, rather it takes a very courageous person to take a long deep look at where they are, and where they are going, Love how you expressed your journey in this excellent poem.
Soul searching is a pretty hard exercise but worth every tear and sweat! Those demons you didn't know existed in your closet ... brrr ... The last time I did decided to spring-clean my closet, I wrote "The Caged Tiger" poem. But you will know yourself better, and you will feel so much peace and 20kg lighter once done.
there's nothing pathetic about soul searching, only giving up. the things you've seen and done, and what i know of them, tell me you've sailed enough oceans to know how to catch your wind.
We all must face our demons from time to time, clean out our mental closets and start anew, and to do that we have to forgive ourselves first of all our past mistakes. Then we can move on.
but then you drop it, and just BE - BE HAPPY!
Love Tinka
Best wishes
Reindeer
God bless, Sue!
Sandie.
its good to search one's soul occationally
William .....peace & love
Don't be so hard on yourself, you're doing fine!
Glad you're back!;-)
I agree with Robert, it is essential that we take
"time out" to regain focus!
nothing pathetic, about that ...
Know that the peace you seek is seeking you with the same alacrity. Be mindful that you don't pass one another up sniffing the trail...
Great piece!
B
Felix