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Could you Help Me Please?
by Linda A Murray → (All Poetry by Linda A Murray)
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This is what I have to do.
I have to try and tie my shoe.
Could you help me? Could you please?
Could you help me bend my knees?
This is very hard to do.
One lace up on my shoe.
Twisting, turning, squirming, too.
Could you help me? Could you please?
Could you help me bend my knees?
Smiling, laughing, grinning too.
Two bows tied just for you.


(c)copyright 2003
 
 
 


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 Reviews of "Could you Help Me Please?"
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on September 9, 2003
Linda...cute write...enjoyed this much my friend!!!

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Absolutely adorable!

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on May 25, 2003
Cuteeeeeeeee..!! LOL, loved this..

Peace, Dove

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
yes, very cute... like it...

Reviewed on May 20, 2003
aDORable write, linda! :) ((HUGS)) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
with a bad knee I sometimes think this when I have to tie my shoes then I wonder if I should just wear sandals all year long but unfortunately I live in New York and we get snow AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
Very nice Linda!
Jack

Reviewed by jing javier
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
cute!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
Linda,
This is excellent. Oh we all need help.
Peggy

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
A plea I am sure I made when I was younger. I am left handed and my mother forgot.......a neigbhour noticed my problem and taught me the left handed way and I have tied every since :-) Short version of a long story. Your poem brought this memory back.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
Linda, very well done. I have those days when everything I touch verifies that I'm all thumbs.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
I can send you some thongs,how about that?
I loved your cute funny poem.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
And sometimes it can be difficult work. Bravo, Linda. It's a cute poem, it's sweet and it is very well written.


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