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The Thunderstorm
by Zahala San Simone → (All Poetry by Zahala San Simone)
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Onset of gray skies
Looks like rain today
My child just sighs
Pulls toys out for play

A whistle of wind
Then a bright flash of light
It’s starting, I think
Hope it’s done by tonight

My windows I close
But I leave cracked the door
I love the air’s scent
Before a downpour

Soon rain begins
Unrelenting and thick
Along with hail's chatter
Like a clock’s slow tick.

A huge clap of thunder
Rolls past my house
With companions of lightning
And wind all about

The storm raged for hours
As clouds changed to white
And again back to dark
One more show of might

And then it was over
Limbs strewn, all was wet
I opened my windows
And took in the scent

Of a clear, green land
Robust and well fed
Washed back to a virgin
Ready to be had.
    

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 Reviews of "The Thunderstorm"
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
Wendi,

You can smell it in the air before it comes; you hear the announcement of impending arrival; you smell it during the storm (mainly fear LOL); you smell the refreshment of air, cleansed afterwards: a wonderful capture of the birth and death cycle of a storm in beautiful lines (rhyming, yet): my ultimate compliment: wish I'd written this.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on October 2, 2006
Nothing like a good rain to revive the land as our spirits...great write.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 4, 2006
I love the scent of the land after a down poor. This is a very well done decriptive poem. Victor

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on September 4, 2006
I love the smell of rain too.
We don't get much in the Sonoran Desert.

Excellent poem.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2006
love the way you ended this one. Great capture of the storm! I too love the scent :-)


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