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May on the Front Step
by Charlie → (All Poetry by Charlie)
Wednesday, May 17, 2017    Rated "G" by the Author.
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It's nice to find an old, forgotten piece of brain-flow. I found this one in a 2013 folder. It's a bit belated, but still works...

May on the Front Step 
 
For a millisecond
April hesitated on the front step of May
and then charged ahead
making such a breeze
that everything dead quavered
 
Twigs and branches rocked in cul-de-sac gutters
pine needles and cones rolled towards lawn edges
detached feathers stood on end and twirled
and leaves danced in devils down roads
twisting clockwise
 
And in that self-same split second
May opened the door too quickly
so that dashing April
was dashed alright
 
And like a daffodil, May rose from the debris
on her yellow, narcissistic lips-- a plea.
May 1?  May I?
Charmed, I'm sure-- 
irresistible face
Enter, then
and welcome.
 


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 Reviews of "May on the Front Step"
Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on September 16, 2018
Such an alluring dance, soft and crazy at the same time. Your poem is as irresistible as that enticing month seducing another or merging with it. A monthamorphosis before our very eyes!

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on May 18, 2017
a fine way to look at this

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 18, 2017
Poetic invention has as many voices as nature has plants. The writing of a poem is like a child throwing stones into a mineshaft. You compose first, then you listen for the reverberation. I find a pleasing resonance in this piece. Peace...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 18, 2017
A refreshing and beautiful new way to look at poetry. The personification of the months is not only unique, but beautifully done. Kudos.

Ron

Reviewed by Leo Durrant
Reviewed on May 18, 2017
The true mark of a poet is not to tell the reader anything, but to make the reader feel something. All your stuff does that for me. You can hear the wind whistling through the crack in the door...
"that self-same split second"
The cadence and tempo all changes when May saunters in. So refined. So elegant, Charlie. (So, Elegant Charlie) Welcome... back.


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