As will be obvious, I grew up when notebooks were made of cardboard and paper and keyboards were associated with typewriters. We still scrambled to fill 'inkpens' and scrawled margin notes in pencil. I hope that despite moldy-old references, this poem evokes pleasant memories of falls gone by. If you ask me, it is a shame that the after Labor Day tradition has gone by the wayside. Don't seem right!
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You are my favorite, you know. Oh, sure,
there are times you make me sad. But jumping
in leaves you send pirouetting down helps chase them
off. Sound tickles -- like Rice Krispies: snap, crackle,
pop! Who can stay blue with you holding all these fashion
shows? That pill Charles Dickens dubbed Mrs. Micawber
cracked a smile in the fall, I bet. Have to love Jack Frost’s
outrageousness. Way he sees that yellow, orange, wine,
and gold are woven into every shade of green. Persimmon
and aubergine all the rage this year, my dears. Frost so wise
to include the gray that signals the maturity to let go and meld
with rain, snow, and the other things spring has ordered
for the show it is planning.
You’re so generous. Christmas and Chanuka without the hunts
for gifts and elaborate meals to prepare. I find myself humming
School Days, School Days, and running mental hands over
spanking new notebook paper ruled with blue and daffodil-
yellow pencils sharpened to elegant points. Chat about
drop-add, teachers, dorms, and loveboats pepper air already
spiced with the smell of bonfire-roasting hot dogs
and marshmallows. Crude stick I whittle triggers laughs
as it bursts into flames. Cooling nights ripen with the subtle
but distinctive odor of cedar-chip-stored wool, smoke,
and hints of rain. Footballs thunk, and cheers go up. Students
pile into coffee houses and pizza parlors to relax or check
to see if part-time jobs are available. Perfume from hastily
unpacked shampoo stirs into the musk rising from leaves,
exhaust, and, as Dickens wrote, High Expectations. All goes
so fast. Takes your breath away.
Thank you for taking me with you. See you next year, I trust.
right there with you, phyllis! miss those lovely fall days in syracuse
new york! but do not miss those horrific winters!
peace & blessing, poetess!
carolyn
My favorite time of year, too. Your poem brought back many memories, especially those of going back to college in the fall to a small town whose countryside was emblazoned with magic and wood smoke. Where trysts would occur in that magic place called the “Devils punch bowl.”
you fell for it Pea -- the rapture of fall with all of its explosions of last colors to be dashed by winter's stark dullness -- and you given us a special peek at a gentler time -- a time I too recall -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael
This and spring are my two favorite seasons. You have captured fall in such a way that it makes so inviting. I enjoyed this very much. Makes me feel like I'm there. May God bless you every day of your life.
Hmmm, I'd always thought, as a kid, that America was like Charlie Brown, but now my eyes have been opened to see that it was like Happy Day's with The Fonze. :)
Great word pictures, one can really visualise these day of BC. (Before Computers) Over there.
Ha ... what a talent you are Sweetpea. This poetic prose is composed intelligently and uniquely and was muchly appreciated. Happy Autumn to ya'll. Peace and continued inspiration ... richard
Nice poem. It took me to far corners of my childhood when I really enjoyed the Fall. Now that I am in Florida, fall is beautiful but different from the falls I experienced when the snow and ice hit the sidewalks. AMEN!
Yes, Autumn can trigger so many wonderful memories..thanks for sharing these..makes me think back to so many I have stored that I have not thought about for years!
Love and Hugs,
Christine
YOU take my breath away, with your descriptive power to make us see, hear, touch, taste, FEEL. A gift worth reading, again and again ... thank you, ((((Pea)))). I adore this write. Y O U.
The Good Old Days of Fall - The Pleasant Memories of Falls Gone By - and you've just re-kindled several pleasant Fall Memories of my own. Thanks very much!
Well you definately did awaken some marvelous memories with this one and took me back to those times when yes...Computors were just science fiction.
Now the kids hardly notice the changing colours...
fee
Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.
Sheila
new york! but do not miss those horrific winters!
peace & blessing, poetess!
carolyn
Enjoyed immensely,
Ron
Axilea
Daniel
Great word pictures, one can really visualise these day of BC. (Before Computers) Over there.
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony
lovely season you describe so eloquently in these lines,
Phyllis. -gene.
And once again I love it!!
Always,
Deborah
Love and Hugs,
Christine
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
Now the kids hardly notice the changing colours...
fee
You have a beautiful mind and a unique way of seeing
and the talent to deliver eloquently and magnetically.
This sings.
John