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Listen to the Stars Coming Out
by Donelle Knudsen → (All Poetry by Donelle Knudsen)
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Around the campfire, amber coals aglow,

their warmth kisses cool skin,

and all is quiet except for

the sound of the stars coming out.

 

Only those in tune, sensitive souls

who have loved and lost

can feel the universal shift of

setting sun to glimmering constellations.

 

A whiff of wood smoke floats upward

to tickle eyes and nose,

while rustling in nearby brush detracts

from the sound of stars coming out.

 

Nighttime chills crawl up my spine,

pulling my coat tight around

at the thought of nocturnal eyes

watching me as the stars come out.

 

Gradually Heaven’s Eye opens wide

to reveal dear departed souls,

some bright, some faint,

but all visible as their stars come out.

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Listen to the Stars Coming Out"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 31, 2009
Truly a lovely write, Donelle. I love the mood that you have recreated with your verses. Love and blessings,

Regis

Reviewed by L Hippler
Reviewed on October 12, 2008
Nice one, Donelle. I especially liked the part about heaven's eye opening to reveal dear departed souls.
Larry

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on October 11, 2008
A very good poem,take care,I enjoy reading it

Edwin

Reviewed on October 11, 2008
Beautiful Write. I could imagine being outside in the night around a campfire. I really loved this.

Mary


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