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Commitments
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What are you committed to?


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Commitments

Everybody has them

Some more

Some fewer

Some noble

Some futile

Some expensive

Some necessary

Some moral

Some imposed

Some healthy

Some neurotic

 

 

Everybody has commitments

Almost all by choice

 

What would my life be like without

One

       Single

                 Commitment?

 

I’d probably have to be committed

 

 

 

 

 

Copyright © 2012 Patrick Granfors

 

 


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 Reviews of "Commitments"
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on April 23, 2012
AAAAAAA-MEN !!

...uh, oh, they're comin' for me. Think I see a strait jacket
and a giant syringe....

;)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 22, 2012
Yes indeed! Our lives must be purpose-driven in order to avoid a sense of futility... or does being driven by our purpose make us feel futile? Perhaps I need to be committed before I find out!? :)) xx

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 21, 2012
You are getting close with that last line. ;-)

Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 21, 2012
My commitment may yet get me committed - or at least arrested. Some nasty person called the cops on me yet again as I lurked in the shadowy bushes attempting to catch Shadow.

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on April 20, 2012
Committing...none the less,
won or lost *Patrick* keep
writing the poetry for it!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on April 20, 2012
Commitment in humor Pat. Smiling ~
Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 20, 2012
yep, committed to the next lifetime ...

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on April 20, 2012
Giggle.....you crack me up, Patrick!!!!!LOVE your sense of humour....keep 'em comin'!!!! Have a great weekend, my friend!

Anna

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on April 20, 2012
Keep this up and a certain little blonde lady will have something to say about some of your commitments.... like #5, possibly #8 and definitely #11.....

Dick

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 20, 2012
Well said, Patrick.

Reviewed by pat medlin
Reviewed on April 19, 2012
and you think "I" have a weird thing creeping around in my head... i'm w/ mark...i thought we were communing with you from a 'state' issued computer that had to be turned in at 'lights-out'

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 19, 2012
I appreciate your philosophical sharing; one that arouses the thought process. Thank you, Patrick. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks
Reviewed on April 19, 2012
You always make me smile while I am learning from you.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 19, 2012
Damn, Mark already said what I was gonna say...Jurseeeeeeeeeeeeeey

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on April 19, 2012
You mean you're not? Hummm? I'd'a sworn.
Mark

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on April 19, 2012
Hah! 'Nuff said . . .


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