The Transit of Venus (poem) by Patrick A Granfors on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 12, 2012

Very creative! I love the "twinkling goddess", Goliath's blemish and the goddess obeying, walking the path that proves Kepler's law.

Axilea

Reviewed by Tom poesyco.th@gmail.com

Reviewed on June 6, 2012

CUZ PAT ... MOST EXCELLENT !

IN BOTH HAIKU FORM, AND CHOSEN WORDS ... I GIVE IT A 10+

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 5, 2012

the transit of Venus seems to have altered your path ...

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2012

interesting orbituary there Pat... I like the idea of a planetary beauty mark... as always, original and refreshing!

be well
Roger

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on June 5, 2012

Awesome!!!We sure won't see it here in Maritime Canada!!! HEAVY clouds that will persist for at least another day..have to catch it next time around I guess....giggle......Great presentation, Patrick!!!

Anna

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on June 5, 2012

a sense of awesome humor
& you are into astrology!!
Now this is very awesome!
Thanks For Sharing This Patrick

Listening To The Sounds Of Jupiter
Vickie

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

Venus befitting of transit for the goddess
shinning in your poetry *Patrick* !!!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

Big deal! So if we miss it, we'll see it next time.
Mark

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

Great reminder, a lovely way of expressing a most special happening; thank you, Patrick. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

Wonderful ~
Even the serious side of Patrick has a bit of whimsy!
Thank you for this news.
Christine

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

Yes...we will get to experience this in
india on Wednesday, tomorrow...it occurs once in eight yrs... No staring at the sun for sure..
Best wishes,neerja

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

You surely are aligned with the universe Patrick, bless ya!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

Thanks for the info, Patrick.

Reviewed by John Coppolella

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

Actually they come in pairs 8 years apart every 121 yrs. The science withstanding, once again the chance to see nature in all its splendor geometrically speaking will be worth the wait, like watching for Halley's comet I'd say, which I saw and describe it as a dirty snowball.
Thanks Patrick for sharing and reigniting my childhood memories one more time.

Starman

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

clouds & off & on rain here, so no watchin' nothing beyond them...

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

THANKS PATRICK, MAYBE I WILL...I MEAN, NOT SO MUCH FOR THE LOVE OF OBSERVING BUT YOUR PROMOTION OF THE EVENT IS JUST LOVELY. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

Haha! Laughing at Dick. But when he's right, he is right. May try that pin hole camera thingamajig.

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

JOYOUSLY BROUGHT TO YOU FROM: The Serious Side of Patrick (SSP)