Greeting and Salutations...Fall! (poem) by Jms Bell on AuthorsDen

Greeting and Salutations...Fall!
by Jms Bell → (All Poetry by Jms Bell)
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An unique look at Summer greeting Fall and...moving on...with delight! Pressing on, amen

Well, hello there... so glad you've arrived! I had a good idea you were just around the corner...what with the days growing shorter Also, I know you are never late ...you're always so faithful and I welcome you, 'cause... I've had my fill of the sun's heat! Yeah, I know, rain did visit... but she distributed herself so unevenly... I mean, truthfully, she was either too much...or...not enough. So, in preparation for much cooler times... let me step aside so that your tantilizing breeze can begin its refreshing. Ah...look, over there... check out my prodigies who are already donning their beautiful new coats...just for you! And one cannot ignore the fact that my melodious feathered guests who once continuously serenaded me are now suddenly making themselves quite scarce. Yes, it defintely time for me to take my leave...as I see my bushy tailed friends, who always remain with you, are totally ignoring me...scampering about, here and there... filling up their storage bins. Thanks for relieving me and if... The Good Lord is willing I'll be seeing you again Same time, same place...next year Bye...bye! Eccl 3:1 copyright;jmsbell;9/25/2011
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Reviewed by Melie Bacon

Reviewed on October 21, 2011

The Good Lord willing! Blessings.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on October 11, 2011

This is an excellent summary of summer flowing into Autumn and autumn flowing into winter. The story flows, and the visuals (bushy-tailed friends) create nice images. A lovely write, Joyce.

Reviewed by Janice Beaty Hamilton

Oh Yes!!! I soooo enjoyed reading this... Fall is my best guest!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 10, 2011

A fine ode to the end of a season and the birth of my favorite one, autumn. Your poem reminds me very much of one that I have posted here at AuthorsDen entitled, "Death of August." Thank you, Joyce. Love and blessings to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on October 9, 2011

Joyce, while I am no fan of winter and an admitted friend of summer -- your poem expresses a justifiable love of the colors of fall and the wisdom of He who controls the seasons with omnipotent wisdom -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on October 3, 2011

The warm days of fall are my favorite. You share that joy with me in your colorful poem.

Ron

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on September 29, 2011

Wonderful poem. Thank you Jesus for the cooler climate! Amen!

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on September 26, 2011

Wonderful and uplifting welcoming to Fall, Joyce! It's my favourite season, and I welcome it a joyfully as you! Nicely done!!!

Anna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

A lovely Ode to Fall, and the wonder of it all.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on September 25, 2011

Whoever is in touch with change
knows the value of living and
the power of love...this is tender,
personal writing, Joyce, and so in
touch with what really matters.

i love that soft 'Bye...bye!' ending.

John

Reviewed by Janna Hill

I enjoyed the light feel of this and smiled at the "bye bye" ending.
:) Janna

Reviewed by Laura Fall

This is absolutely beautiful poetry Joyce well done as always Laura

Reviewed by Ann Marquette

This is just so sweet Joyce. Love it.

ann

Reviewed by Paul Berube

This is a great write. FANTASTIC - OUTSTANDING - BEAUTIFUL - WONDERFUL. Did I forget anything. ;-) Loved it, really. Thanks for sharing this and may God bless.