Go green ( Cinquain) (poem) by J. K. Roseline on AuthorsDen

Go green ( Cinquain)
by J. K. Roseline → (All Poetry by J. K. Roseline)
Thursday, November 3, 2022 Rated "G" by the Author.

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cinquain: a five stanza verse with syllable count - 2 4 6 8 2 It is frustrating to see more and more of concrete everywhere in the name of development. The level of pollution is so high in the Indian capital of Delhi that the CM had to order to stop constructions at the start of this winter!

Money plant Green leaves of money plant gleamed Looked up, silently said, “I am happy to be cared for, Thank you" Now see How fresh I look! No wilted feel I get! I shine with the bright sun each day Thank you Rose flower Feel me But touch me not See my glowing color Call me by any other name? No way! River I flow Don’t burden me Gurgling, bouncing, playing Drink of me down stream, clear, I go Let me! Forest Forest White frosted trees Welcome the fading year November is now here to chill Enjoy Earth Planet Live happily Take care, be safe, stay fit Conservation the only way To be

Reviewed by Mystic Rose

Reviewed on November 7, 2022

What a wonderful way to live, green

Reviewed by Diana Wiles

Reviewed on November 6, 2022

A very timely reminder that illustrates the freshness, beauty and
healing consciousness of Nature as against encroaching concrete structures�
I hope we heed the warning�for the sake of all the children of the Earth�

A beautiful poem Roseline that reminds us of the fragility of our fragile planet�

Love, Diana�🍃

Reviewed by audrine max

Reviewed on November 5, 2022

this was so refreshing! i especially loved the river part. thank you for this piece.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on November 3, 2022

So sorry to hear that progress in Delhi is so contrary to the need for green. They have paved over so much of Houston that we are a hot island in the hot sun. We still pollute with natural gas, but it isn't as obvious.

Your poem deserves wider readership because it simply points out that nature knows best.

I do applaud India for trying to increase habitat, and all the greenery that is involved for the tiger and wild elephant so they will forever continue and maybe bring back, the lion.

Ron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

A most apt and timely message with which I can completely relate. Thank you for sharing your philosophical perspective, J.K. Love, peace, and best wishes, namaste...

Regis. 🙏🌳💚🌲🌎🐘🦋