Yellow River (poem) by Ronald W. Hull on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on March 22, 2003

I was here Ron, got off my lazy fat ass to read your write.

Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2003

absolutely on the same wave as Victor. I enjoyed this...

Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)

Reviewed on March 14, 2003

just what i need right now, a little effective humor. :)

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on March 11, 2003

LOLOLOL
and LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

this is hysterical!!!

Either urine or you're not,
Turgid water hits the spot.

There was a play in nyc last yr, I don't know if its still around, called
Urine Town
this poem makes me think of that and every morning when I would be getting ready to start my day I would hear the commercial and crack up!
lol

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 11, 2003

Now I know where that song came from "Yellow river"....do you remember it...
It must be the same river....lol
Love the way you describe your pee session....lololol
Love Tinka

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2003

Men and their pee! This is good! I laughed. I see the facination in my son's eyes...has to be a man thing...lol...If I had one, I'd be facinated too... :) Teresa

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

I like the ocean blue myself .....I wrote a shortstory called A Black Hearse check it out when you have time if you like

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

great write lets have a peeing contest lol

William

Reviewed by Linda Murray

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

Oh my goodness and we buy water! yuck! Great poem though.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

your in a lot of water here...

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

Wasn't the book "Yellow River" by I. P. Daily published before I was born? No it's "Under The Bleacher" by Seymor Hair I'm thinking of. Gotcha

Reviewed by Jason Wise

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

Given the chance, mankind will feed on everything it finds, never taking the oppurtunity to stop and try and control themselves, in the hope for some kind of a future. Im glad someone else can see that too.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

I agree with Victor;-) I got off easy...

Reviewed by Ois�n Breen (Reader)

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

Reviewed by Victor Jensen

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

Yes, there's nothing as flavorful as urinated beverages. Somebody once said that men and dogs think the world is their urinal. I wondered what they ment. Thank you for explaining it.