I tremble in nighttime fits
Tossing and turning—chills and goose flesh
In a mind-blowing blitz
Seeing buddies
Dead tho’ many years past
Alive in the moment
A cinéma vérité
Of times unsurpassed
I hear their frantic shouts of warning
Their faces
Animate in righteous agony
Amid the thump of mortars crunching
and rockets piercing
Rounds a whistling
and curses echoing
All within a madhouse of frenzy as the bodies fall
A scene so strikingly vivid in my mind
Proximate of green
Heaven of blue
Rice paddy shimmer
Sun’s burnin’ hue
Olive drab uniform
Wounds red glimmer
A psychodrama of colors
Back-flashing
In a room
Pitch-dark
Youre honest prose is refreshing sir
Keep writing
Well done.
Rodney
You've penned the nightmare well.
Hugs, Laura