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Destiny's Water
by Rusty Daily → (All Poetry by Rusty Daily)
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Sometimes you just can't win for losing.


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Destiny, according to Webster
is a predestined course.
Its water are channels
of irresistable force.

It reminds me of the bottle
I set out to sea
from my deserted isle,
come rescue me.

I spoke of my wreck
in storm angry seas.
The screams and the prayers
and the woeful pleas.

I alone washed up
on the barren sand
with pitiful nothings
of the ship contraband.

My destiny was charted,
my life sore and lone.
Destiny's waters surrounded
my islandic throne.

I bottled my plight
and put message afloat.
Lit high reaching blazes
for a bypassing boat.

Foraging, fishing
and a sharpened spear
kept me living on
year after year.

Desolate hours I sat
atop my watery grave
hearing pounding reminders
of Destiny's wave.

I hung myself dead
on the day I learned,
in amongst the rocks
my bottle had returned.

Poseidon's civil servant
wrote on my SOS.
Insufficient Postage
RTS.



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 Reviews of "Destiny's Water"
Reviewed by Brett Moore
Reviewed on October 16, 2006
This poem rocks, Rusty.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on October 15, 2006
you are one clever man! I love your works!

Susan

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on October 15, 2006
A great tongue-in-cheek write. I enjoyed the wry humor of it.
Chanti

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 15, 2006
Very well written...with yet again that twist at the end!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2006
Ah Rusty, this was building up a great drama only to end up with a postoffice joke. So very well done. Victor

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 15, 2006
Damn those postal employee's, I just buy new stamps and they up the rate the next day...I know well what you write of...e & r

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on October 15, 2006
I really enjoyed this poem, Rusty-friend, right down to the sad twist at the end. It reminds me a lot of the Tom Hanks movie, "Castaway". That was very sad, too. Very nice job here, my friend.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on October 15, 2006
Great write and in many ways life is actually like the poem...had my fair share of it as I am sure others can relate too. Waiting idle for our share of blessings to shine pour out on us...very creative.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2006
This one I am sure many even with humor can relate to Rusty... Waiting atop the waves of destiny.,....

Light & peace,
Joselyn


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