Bound myself in fidelity to you thirty five years ago. Better, worse, thick, thin terrible twos and mid-teen blues. All the cliche's apply. un-dying love, ups and downs, moonlit walks and bedroom talks come to mind. I just want you to know I still love you more than a double cheeseburger and fries.
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Reviewed by Chris Fitzgerald (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2006
wow that's a lot of Love!! My Fav. Thanks I'll hsve to share this one with others.Chrissy
I prefer the cheeseburger...totally home related that is!!
Love Tinka
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 8, 2006
But not more than a big mac when hungry?
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 8, 2006
Seems everyone rates a double cheeseburger and fries as high on the list of nutrition. So I'm the odd man out. I would say wine, mature cheese and oysters. Oh well everyone has his opinion which is to be respected. Just love your wife. Victor
This is precious, Rusty-friend. What a joy to read that the feelings are still there after so long. That's love in the real sense of the word. Beautiful thoughts from a sensitive heart.
Love,
CJ
Even the ones that drip and seethe the juice of flavoring fat...and the hot crispy trans lippid dead potatoe, soaking in three day old, something dark and thick, with black little specs of burnt straggling spud somethings?
If I were her I place this on the menu for the next thirty five...Ha see what happens then.(... you'll be the dead potatoe, soaking in..... )
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
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I prefer the cheeseburger...totally home related that is!!
Love Tinka
Brett
Love,
CJ
(is it;-)?lol Good one!ET
Myrna
If I were her I place this on the menu for the next thirty five...Ha see what happens then.(... you'll be the dead potatoe, soaking in..... )
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~