Rain, Rain, Go AWAY! (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2004

cute!
well it is extremely hot here - around 40 degrees C.
i think u shud repeat ur prayer and ask God to send some of the rain here ;)

hope all is well with u and karen, miss ya!!

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on June 12, 2004

I am glad to hear that your head is still above water! SIX inches up here would be a nuisance, for sure, but it would quickly run off into Lake Ontario. Some thing to be said for living next to a giant mud puddle!!!

clever write.

john+

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on June 10, 2004

no the feelin
we were flooded out here people floating away and needing to be saved
take care and I agree with Kostro......give it another ring
this is really cute
take care

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 10, 2004

I Think the telephonelines Up "There" are not workin THAT well sometimes....lol!!

Keep trying like I do...maybe our lines gets crossed thats why there is no reply....one of us has to give first...lol...RIGHT?

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on June 10, 2004

You made me swim through this wonderful humorous current...Karla..GREAT writing!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 10, 2004

Get him to give you some of our sun, it's way too hot, anything over 80, and I'm bushed.

Go collect, as you guys say.

Well good fishing, but stay away from those water mockersons.

Nice one beaut, hope it all drys up soon..

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2004

Love the way you wrote this up. Your writings are incredible. Enjoying your humor too through this rainy season. BTW I asked.......the reason no basements in Texas.....Termites! and other nasty creatures.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 9, 2004

UM HELLO KARLA, THIS IS GOD, FIRST YOU COMPLAINED ABOUT THE TORNADO'S, THEN THE THUNDERSTORMS, THEN THE HEAT, NOW THE RAIN! IS THERE ANYTHING THAT YOU DON'T COMPLAIN AND BITCH ABOUT...? (Ed told me to answer you like the above...LOL)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 9, 2004

Oh my Karla, I hope it stops soon!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on June 9, 2004

I saw pictures of Burleson flooding on the news last night!
Oh my word! God ain't fooling around! He better send some
some sun to us quickly! You got worse than us here near Denton.
I will be praying for you two and you say a prayer for me nd my sister,okay? Bless you guys! Deposit money again! LOL!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 9, 2004

He didn't hang up on you, Karla. Those darn phone lines to Heaven seem to short out a lot - in the rain! Please deposit 50 cents, and try again later.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 9, 2004

Great write Karla!I see all the rain
you guys are getting, and the terrible
flooding etc. Keeping you in prayer!
um... hello...;-)

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on June 9, 2004

I hope the heavens dry up for you soon. Cute write, wonderfully expressed.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 9, 2004

i hope this ends, too, karla...enough is ENOUGH!! it doesn't help that i can't swim, let alone FLOAT! i'm in troubblllllllllleeee...LOL

a humorous slant to a not so funny situation; hope this stuff ends SOON!!!!!!!!! ~quack~ See?? I am turning into a DUCK. And I can't FLOAT! Does that make me a DEAD DUCK?? Guess so! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your waterlogged twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on June 9, 2004

hey.....
its worth a shot!!!!!!!!!!!!
if you get disconnected......you can always redail......
:)

your humor shines thru even when you are stressed
and thats fantastic........

it will stop

don't u think?????????

stay dry......
or try
don't cry
big sigh
aye aye aye

..........pax..........A