Pregnant with moisture, The clouds labor in earnest To bring forth the storm. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lightning tears a wound In the undulating sky. The clouds roar in pain. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thunder screams orders. Demanding obedience, Or firing squad. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hail tattoos the ground. It leaves its mark everywhere, The storm's signature. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A tornado spins. Enticing with twisting hips In a dance of death. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Rainfall claws faces, Spitting like an angry cat That has gotten wet. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The storm signs its name On Earth and its citizens. Fear the wrath above. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The wind eases now. The storm is slowly dying. It gasps one last breath. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Tentative rainbow Plays peek-a-boo with the clouds. The storm is over. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Soothing balm of sun Lays hands on the destruction And the land is healed.
(C) Copy written, 2002/Revised, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
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Reviews of "Stormy Skies (Haiku Series)--Revision, Repost"
The Storm Queen strikes again with her storm-laden muse! LOL EXCELLENT haikus, and love the imagery in them! BRAVA!! And that pic...WOW~ Enjoyed much; thanks for sharing!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2004
BRILLIANT Haiku writing on storm...EXCELLENT use of imagery!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2004
Stunning Haiku. Even gives Thor someting to ponder, love all ten.
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What a funnel cloud!
Brilliant Haiku! You are a MASTER
when it comes to the STORMS!!!!!!!
Gina
Florida, I hope I never experience this storm.
Love Tinka
These are exceptional, each one!Brava!
Reindeer
The Storm Queen strikes again with her storm-laden muse! LOL EXCELLENT haikus, and love the imagery in them! BRAVA!! And that pic...WOW~ Enjoyed much; thanks for sharing!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Take care beaut..