Haiku: The Honeymoon Is Over (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on August 23, 2004

Love the Picture!
Excellent Haiku!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on August 23, 2004

this is one of my favs of your ku, all so excellent

Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty

Reviewed on August 23, 2004

the fight to not drown right?
love the photo...
excellent haiku to match

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on August 23, 2004

It's STILL raining there?
(((hugs-a-hugs-alot)))
cynth'ya

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Great one Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Karla...sound like WWF "lets get ready to rumble"...great haiku...Fletcher B

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Timeless battle of creation's forces captured herein. Bravo!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

very clever ku!

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Ain't that the truth. Excellent. Trish

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Great nature write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

super spectacular ku Karla! Kudo's!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Okay. What's up here, Karla? Stop writing about my marriage. LOL
I love it!

Reviewed by Sarah Tagert

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

a short but very well done write!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Is this a marital dispute, between the celestial gods?

Wonderful Haiku, Karla.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

A definitive and evocative Haiku....Karla
Well done
Love
Peter

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Dear Karla,

how very true, you've certainly captured the moment.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Now, THIS is clever. Love it

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Karla, the queen of excellent haiku...Ed

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Thunder sounds like a lot of people. Nice one!

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Thunder is all talk and no action. Lightning kills. No contest.

Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Great write here for sure
Tommy

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

I agree, Sherry! Terrific job, Karla, and love the picture! Well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Very good metaphors! Well-done, Karla!

Sandie May Angel