Y'all in Florida, Georgia, Alabama, Mississippi and Louisiana are in my prayers.
Go away. You are not welcome here. Your friends are not welcome, especially since the last ones left quite a mess for me to clean up.
I just got it picked up, and I'm not doing this again.
Go away. You are not welcome here. What do I have to do? Spell it out for you in black and white? What part of 'No' don't you understand?
My house is not your home. Do you see a 'Welcome' mat here?
Go away. You are not welcome here. Do not EVEN think of dropping in for a little visit. We won't be home. PLEASE LEAVE US ALONE!
You are not welcome here. Now: GO AWAY. Don't slam the----door!
(C) Copy written, 15 Sept., 2004, by Karla Dorman.
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Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Too bad hurricanes can't understand the message. I'm afraid they are just a huge reminder that ultimately this world belongs to God and He is in control. There's a reason He created them and Houston is as close as I will ever get to living on the coast. It's close enough!! Good write, Karla...
What are you worried about, you are far enough inland, LOL! Let Karen do the cleaning the next time...Ed
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2004
The weather certainly has been nasty this year!
Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2004
Karla, haert felt pleas in this great poem, but sadly these hurricanes and changes in ther weather are part of the long preacherd about warnings from scientists about Global Warming. Sadly, this is just the tip of the ice berg. God help us all if this is irreversible!
That is GREAT!!! Bless your heart for writing support for all of us Gulf Coast dwellers and sending a clear message to Ivan, and all his past and future buddies! I am praying and praying and praying some more for those poor folks in Ivan's path. You are such a good buddy Karla! Michelle
Wonderfully hurricane-y write; could feel the frustration of those affected, especially Florida. And here are our parents going to Florida on Thursday. NOT good! Love the humor in this not so humoresque write; thanks for sharing!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :)
IVAN, IVAN, GO AWAY!!!!!!!!! BAD OLE' HURRICANE....
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2004
Karla, knowing scripture as you do, you know that these
things were predicted for "the Last Days." How wonderful, though,
that we are promised a new world free of them in Rev. 21:1-5
Smile hon...it aint far away.
Way to go Karla! I second the motion!....And all the people in the land remembered how Jesus put up His hand and stooped the storm, so they in unity followed His excample believing they could do it (for He told them they could) so they all kifted their hands as one and said "BEGONe STORM IN THE NAME OF JESUS" and the storm disappeared!
I wonder how many would do it, and afterward how many would thank Him.....
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(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :)
IVAN, IVAN, GO AWAY!!!!!!!!! BAD OLE' HURRICANE....
things were predicted for "the Last Days." How wonderful, though,
that we are promised a new world free of them in Rev. 21:1-5
Smile hon...it aint far away.
I am sure those in those states
agree with you!
Becca
I wonder how many would do it, and afterward how many would thank Him.....
sueb
This one literally 'blew me away' - a captivating and very-well composed write ... thanks for this one, my friend!
Robert
Excellent and to the point. Go home just not to mine. Enough is enough. In all our prayers,
Cynthia