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Haiku: When Mama Ain't Happy...
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Bad boy, bad boy, what ya gonna do when she come for you. :-)


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Thunder stalks the clouds.
Lightning flees before her steps
Like a naughty boy.

(C) Copy written, September 19, 2004, by Karla Dorman.




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 Reviews of "Haiku: When Mama Ain't Happy..."
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
I love the imagery and metaphor here...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Good use of metaphor, Karla.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Beautiful piece
haiku at its best


William ....Peace

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Seems yo me we are on the same page Karla!!

Stormy but good!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Lovely Haiku. So creative you are, karla. I like the way you describe situations in very small lines of Haiku.

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Excellent haiku.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
I like your haiku!
Very descriptive!
Becca

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Must be storm season in Texas...but then again isn't it always? Naughty boys are a given, all boys are naughty! And we love it! Keep Smilling, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Mommy's got her paddle on LOL

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
lol excellent.

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
nothing worse to be around
when mama call the thunder down

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
a very striking experience ...

creative ku!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Fantastic, you are the queen of creative Ku Karla!;-)!

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Wonderful poem and graphics , Karla
Love and Hugs
Peter

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
What a creative haiku!

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Fantabulous, Karla!
Both the poem and the striking graphic.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Nice one. The picture fits so well. Enjoyed.

Reviewed on September 19, 2004
uh oh...sounds like someone's in a serious bit of hurt! LOL cute 'ku, karla! thanks for sharing; enjoyed much~ love the picture, too; this fits the nature of the 'ku perfectly! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D


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