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Haiku: Critical Mass
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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I cannot claim credit for this photo of a lightning flash nearly 200 miles long. It was seen over the entire D/FW Metroplex to Waco, Texas on 6/14/2001. It was amazing!


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Anger is released. 
Slapped by a lightning-quick hand,
The sky sobs its pain.
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(C) Copy written, October 2, 2004, by Karla Dorman.

 


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 Reviews of "Haiku: Critical Mass"
Reviewed on October 3, 2004
I remember that bolt, and then the crashing of the thunder afterwards. It was SPECTACULAR! (And SCARY!!) Powerful, stunning haiku and picture; well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 3, 2004
This is like 1000 bolts shooting through my mind and senses, Karla! One of the most powerful and brilliant haiku I have read! Both metaphor and sentiments are stunning. And JUST the right written form to express this short, sharp, shock! Totally awesome, thank you! Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 3, 2004
I know the feeling Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
I think I know what you are saying here, Karla. Great haiku. Amour et paix à toi. Régis

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
electric

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
Great photo to go with such powerful words.

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
this is so beautiful (like your new appellation)

Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
Good job, Karla! Excellent picture to compliment your writing...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
electrifying intensity!

Reviewed by Linda Roman
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
Very well put...

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
Photo and write, spectacualar. Is the Den quiet today or is it my imagination?

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
Karla you electrify the Den with this Ku! Karla Ku Kable;-)
Brilliant! (I'm fine thank you;-)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
A most Enlightening Haiku, Karla; and I would have loved to seen that epic 200 mile long flah. Wow!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
Majority To Hell bent On Greed To See That Nature Is Simply Purely An Act Of (God)_

Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed on October 2, 2004
Had to step back on this one. (Fear of the power running through it)
Your three lines were far stronger than any power a bolt could produce.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
200 mile long lightening bolt, wow that is some electrical power, as is always your writing of it...Ed

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
Wonderful expression. Sad.


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