Haiku: Sleep TIght! (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

Excellent write
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

and then you can never get rid of that feeling of the web. I hate spiders, but I love to look at the amazing work they do with their webs. Definitely haiku material.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

I cannot STAND spiders!
YUCK! Excellent Haiku!
Love,
Becca

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

Karla,
Excellent haiku. I usually walk into a couple of them everyday and I hate spiders.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

LOL, You sure know how to make this ducks feathers fluff with fear

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

Yikes!!

How Could you do this to me????????

At least I did not see the owner of the web!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

Just what I needed to read just before bed time...thanks, Ed

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 8, 2004

"transparent terror" ... great image this is scary ku ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 8, 2004

This can make the skin feel a bit itchy! :-)

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on October 8, 2004

i love spiders from a far
i would have run away screaming

enjoyed take care lady!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 8, 2004

Karla another Fantastic Ku! You have
a knack for choosing real and events and
making them into fantastic happenings!Kudo's!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on October 8, 2004

It's the spiders again! Oh, I squashed a fat brown one last night. Brown sends off a big red flag. Yikes! Karla, thank you for being so supportive of me. You're the best.

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 8, 2004

EWWWWW I'm not a big fan of the arachnids

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 8, 2004

This has me thinking of poor little Bilbo Baggons......very picturesque weave of fright here :)
anita :)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 8, 2004

Who yer gunna call, BUG busters.

When in doubt give it a clout. (Looks down with disdain at Ed)

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on October 8, 2004

I hate running into spider webs... Yuck!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 8, 2004

Ya...Quite a sticky encounter....no need to worry though Karla..the poor spider is more frightened of us...as he scampers away..
Nice Haiku
Love
Peter

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on October 8, 2004

Oh, What a web you did leave... once you got the hell away from it! I like this one a whole lot. Thanks heaps. - Bill

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 8, 2004

this was all TOO real for me as I walked out my back door only a few nights ago and realized I had web - AND the spider - on my face. yikes.

Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)

Reviewed on October 8, 2004

LOLOL!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 8, 2004

AGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (she says, beatin' herself halfway to death, getting the webbing off her face, hoping there's not an eight-legged visitor riding on her face...ICK! *cringe, cringe*)

crrrrreeeeeeeeepy, chilling write that is sure to get the spider phobics' hearts racing and their blood congealing into a solid block of ice...well done! BRRRRRRRRR!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 8, 2004

Excellent! Love creepy-crawly encounters - especially around Halloween.

And I can even picture that Mad Splatterer, Andy, caught in that lovely thick spider's web - screaming out in terror, not a soul nearby to help...Uh, sorry, Karla. Started getting carried away again with the Bug-Splat thing.