Haiku: Winter's Stiffness (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on December 8, 2004

"Phew"

Love it Karla..

Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)

Reviewed on December 8, 2004

Good one, Karla!

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on December 8, 2004

This is very refeshing ang creative writing! Great one, Karla!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on December 8, 2004

A Karla, a powerful and poignant haiku!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 8, 2004

Marvelous 'Ku and Picture, Karla.

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

Wow, this reminds me of long hours before a computer screen.
Love it, Karla

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

A beautiful write
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

Beautiful!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

Great description of arthritic pain.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

Auch...this ssound painful to me..even for a tree!!

Well penned Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

when winter falls upon us it's important to seek ways to thaw out ...

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

absolute clarity of words and visual, very well done

Carole

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

My Neck Feels Like It Winter,i.e. We Got Cold In Early November California-- Man keeps Trien To play God Even With Weather!

Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by Rose L

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

Karla,

The perfect Haiku for this picture! I agree with everyone else who is amazed at how well you've managed to capture the essence with such economy, often the greatest challenge of a Haiku.

Bravo!

~Rose~

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

It isn't just branches that are stiff in the winter! How about my aching back!!!??? This is a lovely Haiku Karla...you do them well.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

This little haiku speaks volumes. Very nice, Karla
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Danielle Mundy

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

Excellent haiku. It's amazing what you can say with so few words. Yours captured that pic perfectly :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

Wow!This is outstanding my friend!you captured the pic to perfection!
Okay Karla Ku top rung of the ku ladder!;-)

Reviewed by Rukiya Faizah (Reader)

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

good haiku and i love the pic.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

I hope your pain doesn't affect you like that when winter arrives...Ed

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

My goodness that is exactly how I feel when the weather changes.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

(((Karla)))

OW! This made me hurt! Great haiku; very descriptive of arthritis in wintertime! Well done; BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on December 7, 2004

Reminds me of me LOL. great lines