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The Meteors Play
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Watched the Geminid meteor shower last night before bed, and got up an hour before sunrise and saw more shooting stars. The wind whispering through naked branches and the show above inspired this one. :) (And yes, it was COLD!! but worth it. *grins*)


Poem Artwork

In the brittleness of a frozen night,
Stars wink,
My twin sister and I think of God's eyes
As they
Look down from the Heavens on both of us.

Suddenly there is a bright flash of light,
As a
Meteor signs its name on the starlit skies,
A quick
Bold signature autographed with no fuss.

The trees wrap their branches around themselves
As the
Wind strips them of rainment, leaving them bare.
They talk
And fondly recall the lost summer days.

Texas trees hate cold, unlike Santa's elves,
And they
Do not like shivering in the cold air...
And in
The dark skies above, the meteors play

(C) Copy written, 14 December, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "The Meteors Play"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 15, 2004
Excellent write Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 15, 2004
Just love your kinda new style of work. Still has such class.

Classic descriptions. Beaut..

Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)
Reviewed on December 15, 2004
The dark skies above, the meteors play...
A great poem!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on December 14, 2004
Lovely show as seen through your words...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 14, 2004
Its always cloudy here in wonderful NJ when there is a show to watch in the sky...ed

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2004
such a wll crafted verse for all those falling stars Karla, quite enjoyed, Al

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 14, 2004
Too many clouds to see the meteors' display but thanks to your verses, I get to see them anyway. Merci, Karla. Amour et paix. Régis

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on December 14, 2004
Beautiful.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 14, 2004
i missed the meteors this time but your poem allowed me to invision this wonderful sight quite vividly ...

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on December 14, 2004
The show was indeed a beauty. Nice write.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 14, 2004
It was a spectacular show. To see even one shooting star, seems like a blessing but to see them skirting all over the sky is an amazing thrill that takes my breath away. Nice write, Karla. I am glad you got to see this.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed on December 14, 2004
Excellent write Karla
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2004
I saw them too and many more during my nights delivering papers it still fascinates me.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on December 14, 2004
You are a sky watcher huh?
lovely write karla........
now I am feeling earthy and cosmic lol

pax A

Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on December 14, 2004
Delightful, my friend! Your creativity shines brightly! A fun read!

Reviewed by Dave Harm
Reviewed on December 14, 2004
Bringing nature and the universe to life! These events (like your poems) should never be missed.

Reviewed on December 14, 2004
(((Karla)))

Even meteors have to have fun ONCE in a while...and there is nobody whom I would want to share the experience of watching meteors with than you! Nice write, love the imagery! Well done, BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D


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