Thank you for your prayers. I'm feeling better. :-)
To prove it, I rode Thunder today. :-) Giddyap! :-)
~~~~~ I rode Thunder today A blaze of lightning on his forehead And gentle, gentle eyes I rode Thunder today ~ I rode Thunder today I haven't been on a horse in years But it was so much fun I rode Thunder today ~ I rode Thunder today I wanted to fly across the Plains And gallop like the wind I rode Thunder today ~ I rode Thunder today Talk about conquering fear of storms And making memories I rode Thunder today ~~~~~ (C) Copy written, 18 December, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
a wonderful write, I can almost feel the wind on my face...
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on December 19, 2004
You, Karla, maybe more than anyone I've read, use repetition with such gusto, with absolute meaning! It so adds to the enthusiasm, I could see and even better, I could feel your own freedom as you 'rode Thunder'...
You, dear heart, simply LEAP from the page... a wonderful treat for this reader! Very cool!~ (smile) katy xox.
Giddy Up, Girl - Hooray for you!!! And for Thunder! Every time my wife and I head to New Mexico, the first thing we do is go horse back riding; I love it; and I would love to own a noble steed like Thunder.
Your exhilaration shows through this wonderfully spontaneous piece, Karla! I am sooo pleased for you! You rode Thunder, conquered pain and fear, sped like lightning - you rocked and rolled, gal! Good for you - and the form of your poem matches your mood! Well done! LOL Kate xx
Karla, I hadn't rode a horse in years until last weekend, and I showed up at my sister's just in time to fill the saddle, before she turned Blaze back out in the pasture. There's just a feeling of freedom one gets sitting high on the back of that much muscle and power, but the next morning? I thought I was going to die! Every one of my muscles were hurting and tender to the touch, not sure I'll do that again! lol
I'm glad though that you took the chance and rode Thunder...I know you truly enjoyed it.
Atta gal! I felt your excitement Karla, as tangibly as I feel the excitement of a child on Christmas morn. I was brought up on horse back and know well the thrill of riding like this. You took me on another journey. Thank you!
Love Chanti
Excellent write....but I was on a horses back once...and I almost fell of his back and I said to myself...no ways will you get me back on...rather ride a kawasaki or a suzuki motorbike...then I can use my brain instead...lol!! That horsie did not like me I guess!!
Horses As Rule Are Docile Animals-- But Only Saint Michael My Arc Angel Rides In Control Of "My Dark Horse"- No Name Cut, Won't Be Any Shame Whence He Tramples You (Evil Bastards)Child Molestors Too Death_
Keep On Writing You Can Only Get Better N Better!
TRASK
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2004
Karla, not only did you ride it, you conquered it with wonderful imagery. Dynamite job! Take care and be well.
A wonderful write about something we normally don't get to experience! Love the energy and positiveness of this free-spirited poem; can feel the joy and excitment in your words! Well done; BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
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You, dear heart, simply LEAP from the page... a wonderful treat for this reader! Very cool!~ (smile) katy xox.
Thunderduck
I'm glad though that you took the chance and rode Thunder...I know you truly enjoyed it.
Lisa
Love Chanti
God Bless
Michelle~
Love Tinka
EDL
Keep On Writing You Can Only Get Better N Better!
TRASK
What a fantastic, resounding, and upbeat write - superb imagery my friend ... love this one!! Hope all is well!!
Robert
Correction: WE rode Thunder today!! *grins*
A wonderful write about something we normally don't get to experience! Love the energy and positiveness of this free-spirited poem; can feel the joy and excitment in your words! Well done; BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D