Haiku: Unembraceable You (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on January 16, 2005

hey Karla, yes it is magnificient and destructive, nice little piece. l&p G

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2005

Magnifico, Sister of the lights!
(I know you say "Lady of the Lights", but
sister strikes me as more referring to all
the poets who admire you as such.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 4, 2005

No one can hold it - a marvelous 'Ku, Karla.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on January 4, 2005

Excellent, Karla

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on January 4, 2005

Perfecto! No, I mean it is really.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 4, 2005

Powerful write Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)

Reviewed on January 4, 2005

Just amazing.....

Reviewed by Danielle Mundy

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Very true, Karla. Sad, but true

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

an insightful wave of idea ...

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Brilliant, Karla!!! You swept me into ferocious, gentled beauty... You are a wonder, love, may you always free self and us into your reverence of words and compassion. :)

Your friend,
Erin

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

You pack a lot of punch in this little haiku...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

/Thanks for sharing your gift of description and feeling - so short and so sadlhy true. - Bill

Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

O' The awesome power of the sea and of nature itself. Terrific write, Karla.

Reviewed by Pier Tyler

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Short and to the point. A lot said. I love that pic.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

outstanding ku...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Nature cannot be stopped once it gets its dander up...Ed

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

But Karla, maybe we should use its energy for power, rather than fosslie fuels.

Your Haiku, is excellent. so much captured in just 14 words.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

As much as we try we cannot defeat the forces of nature.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

(((Karla)))

Awesome write, awesome picture, awesome you! You are really taking off on your writing; may your muse always continue to inspire you! Solid writing here; keep up the terrific job! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Powerful reality, matches the pic...Excellent Karla Ku;-)