Senryu: I'm Late! I'm Late! (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

It's a crazy world. I know what you mean. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

hey Karla this was great. You're the poet and Karen is the story teller, I guess, maybe vise versa or versa vice, you're both good! I'm about to cheetah out of here for home, like that running cheetah! G

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

Lol, Karla=)

Reviewed by Nila Jamier (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

Very cute !

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

Cute!

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

Great write Karla
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

hahahahaha.....run girl!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

know the feeling. Great write.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

This is wonderful and my watch is set on hmm.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

Fantastic Karla! I love your insouciance;-)!

luv,eileen

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

I'm glad that someone else has this problem!! I swear that there's a black hole of time EVERY day between 11 and 1 and I frequently mistake the latter for the former. Neat and sleek, Karla! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

LOL, Karla. I seem to linger here a bit too long when I should be out the door to work, too. I get caught up in reading and just don't want to quit. Cute Senryu!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

Wisdom and wonder fill the lettters of "Senryu: I'm Late! I'm Late!".

Healthy Thoughts and Creativity.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

Funny...isn't it funny how one can be ready for work two hours before hand but never leave till late...LOL! Ed

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

i need a new watch, mine doesn't give me enough time for anything

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

what a delightful haiku, Karla...
~Carole

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

Good Grief, Karla... your quickies are stuffed like a thimble full of bowling balls! How DO you do it? This is magnificent. While you're 'firing off' these compact life-truths, we're scratching our heads, looking for a title. You amaze and delight... What a gift you have, me sweet! (smile) katy xox.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

(((Karla)))

LOL at Ed K's comment

Adorable 'ku; so true! Very nice; and love the running cheetah! Cool! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

Wishing you the speed of a cheetah, and the wisdom of a turtle!