Senryu: Time Marches On (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 19, 2005

Have a grand and glorious time, Karla...take your camera..
Hugs, Carole

Reviewed on February 19, 2005

Dear Karla,
These three lines and but a few words are so effective. Great use of alliteration in the first three words set the tone. Great Haiku!
I hope you have a fabulous Cruise. You will be missed.
Love Chanti

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

I hope you have a blast Karla
God Bless
Michelle!
P.S Call me beofore you leave, and I'd love your phone number if you don't mind...

Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

I've never been on a cruise. I'm sure it's heaven. You have a great time and tell us all about it!!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

I love cruises, and if the sea is rough at night, it's like being rocked to sleep.

All at sea Andy..

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

You enjoy, girl! I've never been on a cruise. Sounds like quite an adventure. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Enjoy yourself Karla...and know that you will be missed!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Have a great time, Karla. Cruises are great and they do go too quickly. I hope you are cruising somewhere fun! Every cruise creates memories, so don't forget to take your pen and a notebook, we want all the wonderful details.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Enjoy every second of that fabulous cruise - because they do go much too fast - and don't waste too much time sleeping on it. And when they are over, I've felt like hanging on to the ship, too!

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Have a great time Karla. Waiting often makes the trip that much more enjoyable.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

A very strange one with a graphic picture but there is a whole lot that I like about this.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Love the play of words :-)

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Karla, have fun and make a lifetime of memories in the few short days.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Karla you are right, all the wait then it's over in a flash!
But there is nothing like being at sea, you will love it! You
will have all the memories to treasure forever. Make sure you're
prepared for the dinner picture they take at your table. You'll
have that to treasure too, among your other pics.

etw

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

I would pay to see you hanging on to that boat...Ed

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

(((Karla)))

I hope you have fun on your cruise; you deserve it! It's getting close; I can sense your excitement! Good for you!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Wonderful write! Well done! BRAVA!

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

i hope it is everything you hope for. i have always wanted to go on one but i travel with my sister and she says i'm not her ideal date for a cruise LOL