The Calm That Came Before The Storm (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 25, 2005

(((Karla)))

Powerfully and horrendously stark write; very well done! BRAVA!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

WHEN will this madness end????

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on July 24, 2005

excellent write Karla. Calmness is superficial these days. If you dig one inch deep you will no there is something wrong somewhere in the set up. Peace and love to you sister

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 24, 2005

Yes Karla. The tragedy is that one never knows does one? Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on July 24, 2005

Exactly! And any of us could find ourselves on that bus with this calm before the storm.
Awesome portrayal Karla.

Lisa

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on July 24, 2005

horrorific

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 24, 2005

excellent capture! unfortunately, a most too common storm ...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 24, 2005

Fortunately these crazies have not been able to find anything nuclear...yet...? Ed

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on July 24, 2005

You have a wonderful capacity to write from another's perspective and thus widen the reader's view.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 24, 2005

This is an incredible write, Karla. So very strong and powerful with clear images. Amazing work, my Friend.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

Short and powerful. Excellent write.

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

Powerful poem!! This is wonderful and amazing how you captured it!
I'm glad that you are ok and that's what I mean so Brave and Courageous. Thank You Karla xoox42
Tracey

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

Fantastic take on a very difficult situation.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

Right off the nightly news. Well done.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

You'll never know what he looked like, and you'll never know what had made him tick. It's so sad when that happens. Only the innocent ones suffer the most of the consequence.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

Powerfully horrifying, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

OMG this is such a down to earth, reality of the world we live in write that it brought a pain to my chest to read it. How did our world ever come to this? Wise write.

Felix

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

I'll take two of what ever trask is on...
6 terrorists were caught here in my town. Kinda makes yer think.
We just gotta have that inner calm, and carry on regardless. Life's too short to let 'em rule one by fear.
Clever write, from a witness' view point..

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

I ditto Jerry..."Hell of a damn frightening, REALISTIC write" Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

Hell of a damn frightening, REALISTIC write. You did good, Karla.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

The CALM Is Even Before The End Of The World_

As You All Know It To Be Physical World,i.e. In Blink Of Your Eye You Will Be Gone--SOD!

TRASK