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Haiku Chain (5/7/5): Emancipation
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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The clouds building up inspired this one. Perhaps an end to the heat wave??? GAD I hope so!


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the restraints imposed
by the clouds have been removed;
they are free to go,

taking tentative
steps on the road before them,
they take one last look

at where they once were
and see the path they must take
to independence ...

so they forge ahead,
blazing fiery trails of
thundering freedom!

(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.










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Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on August 29, 2005
I really like this, Karla. Very well done. ~~Nordette

Reviewed on August 29, 2005
(((Karla)))

Very excellent poem; I love your writing, and you continue to soar! BRAVA!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on August 28, 2005
nicely done, karla.
peace,
carolyn

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 28, 2005
so they forge ahead,
blazing fiery trails of
thundering freedom!

Marvelous, Karla!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 28, 2005
Oh I hope the rain does go your way and stay for another day...we had enough for now...so here it is....sending it via AD!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 28, 2005
Well, at least for a little while the heat was cooled, but today I'm sure it will return. I'm by no means a cheerleader for cold weather, but this year I'll be a bit more willing to welcome it. This heat and humidity is killing me!
All of these were inspiring and well written Karla. I enjoyed them all!

Lisa

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on August 27, 2005
Excellent chain Karla, one can feel the words!

peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 27, 2005
Splendid write and I can see and hear the thunder and lighting in your imagerey.

Felix

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on August 27, 2005
Wow! This is a great chain!!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 27, 2005
Karla these ku are totally fantastic. You are a whiz at these!

Joy and Peace
Eileen

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2005
So it wasn't you that sent the heat? Not giving it back! Snow will come soon enough. Wonderful build up on the effects of a storm about to let go!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2005
Can you Fed Ex some of that heat over here please.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2005
Yup. they building up around here too, but in our case it's the bitch Katrina hetting ready to make an appearance. Nice haiku.

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2005

Once again....Outstanding!
No Karla... I sincerely doubt your wordds will ever leave!
Thank God Almighty because I love your work!
peace',
Rich Criso Suarez

Reviewed on August 27, 2005
Karla:

This was very creative indeed!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)


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