Haiku (5/7/5): Peak Performance (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 8, 2005

neat ku, kj;

as for 4 seasons in one week --- ever been to saskatchewan? 4 seasons in one week, includimg snow in august

L & H

john+

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on December 7, 2005

Excellent haiku describing beauty in the heart of seasons

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on December 6, 2005

Incredible diversity that we could hardly believe possible were it not for the truth of our own eyes... that's how I constantly think of the changing nature of the skies. There's really no such thing as "surreal" in nature... the thing about having all four seasons in one week means that there is not enough time to either get bored of the one you're in or to anticipate the next... bikini and bearskin boots... interesting! :)) Words paint this canvas well, Karla. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 6, 2005

The haiku captures the scene most effectively, Karla. Merci! Amour et paix.

Regis

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 6, 2005

Karla!

Brilliant, magical, beautiful haiku, as only you can do! Keep these gems coming; you have a pen of GOLD!! BRAVA!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on December 5, 2005

You paint a picture I can actually see, I think I would like all four seasons in one week...LOL Ed

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on December 5, 2005

Very nice.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 5, 2005

Excellent.....you have a beautiful view...lucky you!!

Love the whole package!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on December 5, 2005

Texas, always doin' its own thing... 'ku catches the heightened color and senses of autumn. stay warm. Dawn

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on December 5, 2005

Well done, Karla! You've covered our past four days in a delightful Haiku...
I still have some begonias and gerbara daisies blooming, and my Myers lemon tree to bring in from out back before tomorrow eve. Once that's done, I won't mind waking up to a blanket of white :o)

IT'S CHILI-MAKING TIME!!

Micke

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino

Reviewed on December 5, 2005

Lady K,

From the sky to your eyes to...my soul.

Well done lady!

Peace and (((Hugs))),

B

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 5, 2005

Talk about fluctuating circumstances wow! How do you dress;-)?lol
Superb Ku Karla you really have a great touch for Haiku/senryu

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on December 5, 2005

Excellent Karla winter has hit Cali as well
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on December 5, 2005

This is lovely Karla. You do it so well.
Wishing you all the very best over this Christmas season.
Take care
Chanti

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on December 5, 2005

Absolutely mythical. I can see a pair ... that is a pair of unicorns ... one black unicorn and one white unicorn ... on their two hind feet charging up and playing under this colorful rainbow and blue sky you built from a ku. Nice, Karla! I will call it a UNI-ku!

Sage

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on December 5, 2005

Yet so many miss it!!!!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on December 5, 2005

I can see it, vividly. Your words paint the canvas of my thoughts and I am there with you. You looking pretty darn good too. LOL Gotta love it.