sleeping in a dark, secluded corner of a poet's brain is a muse suddenly a noise piques her interest; a delicious smell twitches her nose
she comes awake for goodness sakes
alert now, she searches for the disturbance that interrupted her dreams it was only her pet fumblingstumblingstubbing a toe cursing while turning on the computer
it's three o'clock methinks she's crocked
silently, the muse hops down the stairs one-by-one-by-one (12 in all) on bunny slippered feet goes into the living room where she sees her pet blinking stupidly at a blank screen
"why won't words come i must be dumb"
the muse rolls marbled eyes in frustration she's been through this before nearly every night her pet can't sleep so she makes sure no one else will, either
and so, they write throughout the night
it's a poet's right to be a little mad to get up at all hours when the words strike it's too bad, however, that the muse has to suffer
from lack of sleep price of fame, steep
the only thing the muse hopes is that her pet will remember her when she is a celebrated author and that she'll be able to take a long overdue vacation
the poem, done the best, this one
suddenly, a bolton twist of lightning zaps the transformer right outside the window !the power goes out! !!the computer explodes!! ... and it's back to the beginning, in the dark
Aren't you the clever one!;-) Fantastic work Karla! you really are into this form. I like it too, Jerry gave us a wonderful style to work with.You have it down pat! Superb work! Kudo's!
You have found your form, Lady, and you are taking on the Master like the Young Turk. What a stunning invention that it has so inspired a writer to FIRE in this way!! Kudos to you BOTH!! Touche!! LOL K xx
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Hey yeah, sleep is over rated. I love this. So enjoyable. Had me smiling all the way.
Better bolt-on a new lightning proof transformer.
Karla, you are too much!! This is fabulous! I love it! Witty and a terrific septcouplet to boot!! Or should I say a terrific septcouplet to Bolton! Great write!
I love it. It is so cute and readable. My muse is a caffiene junky, she has no choice because of the hours I keep. Coffee is the only thing that keeps her awake.
Very cute and clever, Karla. You are getting good at these septcouplets!! This format seems close to perfect for the storywriter/poet.
Take care,
Sherry
Excekkent Karla keep em coming
God Bless
Michelle!
Reviewed by Walker Jackson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 6, 2006
Karla I do hope your dream comes true. We all need an enchanting vacation afforded by a best seller. Your muse is quite interesting. Red beans and ricely
You are getting so good at what you do. This possesses a certain charm that I find exhillerating, and the humor is clearly evident in your carefully chosen words. Your poetry has reached a new realm, and I am in awe of your expanding talents as a writer! BRAVA!! Take a bow!!
LOL at Jerry's review; you've learned from the BEST! :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
P.S.: I LUV that pic!! :) The StormSpinner strikes (get it?? *Grins*) again!! :D
I agree with Jerry !
You are really in the groove with these septcouplet gems Karla, Great Storm Spinner !
You gotta love this magical line " suddenly, a bolton twist of lightning " !!!
Jerry will be rocking in the aisles !
Peter
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 6, 2006
If the glove don't fit, you gotta acquit . . . Oh, that's something else . . . er . . . You are getting too damn good here, Karla. This form fits you like a glo . . . Oops, yew-no-whot-I-mean.
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Better bolt-on a new lightning proof transformer.
J E R R Y she is gettin G O O D so W A T C H I T !!
You Rock Karla!!
Love Tinka
Peace. Joyce
Bobbi
You're really good at these. Love that pic also.
Paul;-)
Love and Hugs, Birgit and Roger
Felix
blessin's and ((hug-spinning)) to you,
cynth'ya
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Take care,
Sherry
God Bless
Michelle!
You are getting so good at what you do. This possesses a certain charm that I find exhillerating, and the humor is clearly evident in your carefully chosen words. Your poetry has reached a new realm, and I am in awe of your expanding talents as a writer! BRAVA!! Take a bow!!
LOL at Jerry's review; you've learned from the BEST! :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
P.S.: I LUV that pic!! :) The StormSpinner strikes (get it?? *Grins*) again!! :D
You are really in the groove with these septcouplet gems Karla, Great Storm Spinner !
You gotta love this magical line " suddenly, a bolton twist of lightning " !!!
Jerry will be rocking in the aisles !
Peter