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Haiku: Early Morning Poets
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Submitted for a haiku contest, the original and a revision.

Poem Artwork

gulls write poems
in calligraphy on
golden parchment


(REVISION)

golden parchment -
calligraphic tracings by
morning poets

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.
 
 
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 Reviews of "Haiku: Early Morning Poets"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 1, 2006
You are damn good....brilliant yet again...I cannot wtir ku's to safe my butt...I talk too much...trying to find the right word to express myself!!!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
Wonderful! Love them both Karla!
Love & Friendship Suzie xox :-)
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
lovely
Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
k.j.,


good ku -- i prefer the rewrite -- well done

john+
Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
They are both endearing and evocative haikus Karla, and my personal favorite is the revision !
I always come away from your Den inspired and refreshed
Peter
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
I love both vesions please don't make me choose.

Feix
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
Hey Karla..this is really good..I don't think I'll ever be able to write a flamen Ku as it should be written..sigh..LOL

But you do a great job of it!! YAY!!

Lovely!


vesna:)
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
Brevity at its best.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
I enjoyed both of them. My favorite one is your revision but I have to say both are strong!
Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
i like this very much Lady Karla, very classic feel to it.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
Karla~

Haiku perfection! BRAVA; take a bow!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
I hope you're collecting these for a book!
Beautiful work Karla!

eT
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
Beautiful, words and picture!
Love adn hugs, Birgit and Roger
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