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Haiku: Crooked Path
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a bee flies
crookedly when burdened
with pollen

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Haiku: Crooked Path"
Reviewed by Janet Bellinger
Reviewed on March 2, 2006
and don't we all. Great poem, Karla.

Janet

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 1, 2006
Yip spoton!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on February 28, 2006
(((Karla)))

Adorable write; very well done! Love the picture; it suits the poem to a "Bee"! Er, I meant "T"! LOL Brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

A buzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzilicious write! :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 28, 2006
hahaha too cute! Karla kU!;-)

eT

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on February 28, 2006
A bee flies drunk and inebriated with pollen...lols
Usually they have to zig zag home like a worse for the wear driver !
Clever haiku Karla
Peter

Reviewed on February 28, 2006
Reminds us of our neighbors toddler, when she's burdened with her mom's purse. Sweet write,
Love and hugs, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 28, 2006
Yes this is so true and one can so easily see where you make the jump between the bee and us, we struggle so hard in this world to accumulate wealth and possessions that we also more then once end up on a crooked path before finding our way home to what is right.

Felix

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 28, 2006
A busy bee's work is just never done.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 28, 2006
Astute observation on the busy bee.


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