Severe weather season got off to a roaring start yesterday evening and overnight. High winds; vivid lightning; heavy rain and hail; tornado watches and warnings across parts of North Texas and Oklahoma.
Thank God, no damage where we are, except shattered nerves. I hate this time of year...
late night thunderstorms shake sleepers out of their beds and onto the floor;
thunder underlines words penned by lightning across the turbulent skies;
the wind chases its tail and spins itself dizzy in tornadic fits;
heavy rain and hail bombard the pavement with shock- and-awe precision;
tornado sirens moan the advent of danger screaming from the clouds;
stormphobics unite in panicky meetings of 'what-do-we-do-now?'
welcome to the start of severe weather season ... Springtime in the Plains.
(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.
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Reviews of "Haiku Chain (5/7/5): Springtime in the Plains"
Another well written piece and being your neighbor, I know the feeling. It's weird though, I am more afraid of earth-quakes than tornadoes. I guess b/c I am used to them and like you have lived through some terrible times. Though the train like sounds are what get to me horribly.
What imagery and word choice you have utilized in this dynamic show of nature's furry! WOW!! Excellent yet again, Storm Spinner! I LUV the stanza about the wind chasing its tail! BRILLIANT! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn the Texas Tornado. :D
I'm with Eileen, it's a real gift the way you write about storms, Karla. Love your "wind chases its tail" ku above. Hope it calms down. Think your storms are headed East tonight. Dawn
Thank you for sharing this stormy haiku set, Karla. Love and peace to you, (PS. It's snowing here today and we should be looking at spring flowers by now.)
I saw the weather report this morn saying your area on watch for all day. Keeping you both in thoughts and prayers! Karla the one thanks you can give to the weather is that it brought out the best poetry in you and these Ku are fantastic example of it! The good/bad of all things;-)(Thank God there is a good ;-)
I concur with the board below completly Karla
You are the true Storm Spinner, and you have demonstrated it again in this highly charged and electric pen
The graphic is awesome
Peter
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2006
this is the part of spring that has me nervous as well, in the north, occassionally tornadoes, but more likely it is the danger of Ice storms, beautiful but deadly.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2006
Yep. Spring is in the air, so are tornados. Had one in Arkansas a few hours ago.
Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.
Janny xoxoxo
Love Tinka
love and peace, Carole
Love and hugs, Birgit and Roger
What imagery and word choice you have utilized in this dynamic show of nature's furry! WOW!! Excellent yet again, Storm Spinner! I LUV the stanza about the wind chasing its tail! BRILLIANT! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn the Texas Tornado. :D
Regis
eT
You are the true Storm Spinner, and you have demonstrated it again in this highly charged and electric pen
The graphic is awesome
Peter
to paraphrase the battle cry of the Irish Guards: "Keep yer head down, k.j.!)
LOVE
j+