Haiku: African Sunset (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

Beauty in word and motion,
love, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

You do great with these Haiku's, a form I have yet to master...
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

Awesome colors with the giraffe silhouetting the sunset. Your words give us just enough to get the picture. It is a full peace this Haiku brings.
Thanks!
Susan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

Love it!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

sweet write
Felix

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on March 29, 2006

No one misses the taste of this beauty more than the one who lives with the beauty itself. An African in this area yearns to see the tall buildings of a city and cars, totally forgetting that this place is more beautiful than big cities. When beauty is part of your ordinary life it will not get any attention from you. Likewise when you live in the land of jewels you treat them like ordinary stones.
Excellent poem with powerful images and picture. Your brother in somalia

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on March 28, 2006

perfect!

Susan

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on March 28, 2006

full of color and life. nicely done!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 28, 2006

Oh no Jerry, now we gotta know what about your first wife...??

Oh, hi Karla, forgot I was on your den, this was as always up to par with all you usually write...Ed ;)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 28, 2006

It touches my blood and as always when africa is mentioned I find a hunger growing in me to check it out. Thanks for the sharing.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on March 28, 2006

Talent in motion, Karla...lovely!
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 28, 2006

I'm so glad your so brave and bold these days..
Thanks for your encouragement me friend..
with love
Ron
This is a great post.....

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 28, 2006

Karla your Ku are beauty in motion too! You really have a feel for haiku!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 28, 2006

Karla,

Stunning haiku, equally stunning animated graphic! Spectacularly presented; very well done! Take a bow; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Savin' it! :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 28, 2006

Yeah, giraffes necks make me think of my first wife. ((((Don't ask.)))) LOL