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Haiku (5/7/5): Humidity Comes
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humidity comes
as a wet, soggy blanket -
uncomfortable

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.

 


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 Reviews of "Haiku (5/7/5): Humidity Comes"
Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on April 12, 2006
Very true, enjoyed.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on April 10, 2006
A wonderful capture Karla, it often gets that way in Indiana
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 10, 2006
You said it best here Karla.

felix

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on April 10, 2006
Dear Karla,

A wonderful Ku, sometimes just like our South African weather :(

Smothering sticky
Unpleasant and so clingy
Moisture dense and tight!

warm hugs and love
Elga

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Reviewed on April 10, 2006
Well described and conveyed!

Reviewed on April 10, 2006
Oh yes, it can be a very, very uncomfortable blanket, smothering us. Great little Ku,
Love, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed on April 10, 2006
Thankfully we don't have the humidity here yet, but I can relate to the wet soggy blanket park, it seems California has been having wet, wet weather...
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 10, 2006
This piclooks justlikeMacon inthemorning attimes.
Enjoyedyour hiakukarla.Icouldfeel it.
Susan

Reviewed by totally anonymous (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2006
too true. excellent 'ku

Reviewed on April 10, 2006
Ah so true Karla, I loved this!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2006
And that, America, is the r-e-s-t of the story. Gotta love it.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 10, 2006
aye-aye... a night on the tiles, eh, Miss Karla?? Or rather, with that blanket spread on the ground Tammy Wynette fashion??? BTW, I'm talkin about the overnight dew falling on the blanket left out all night... in case you're now wonderin... Yep, nothin worse than a wet blanket to ruin an atmosphere and make everyone feel uncomfortable! :)) Nice ku. LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 10, 2006
it sure do
ms haiku
but that u knew!

pax A

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 10, 2006
Keep it in Texas...PLEASE...;) Ed

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on April 10, 2006
Karla
Reminds me of LA in August...:)
Looks like you're in for nasty weather midweek down your way !
Love and Blessings
Peter

Reviewed on April 10, 2006
Beautifully done. Enjoyed and can relate.

Hugs, Trish

Reviewed on April 10, 2006
Karla~

You've got that right! LOL Springtime in Texas: gotta' love it! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 10, 2006
You've just made me think of August in Washington - YUCK!


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