Cereal Killer (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

Charming writing Karla...good luck, hope you win
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by David Young

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

This was cool, brought a smile.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

This could definately be a video game! Like pac man, only annihilating all of the cereals...great write, Karla!

Sage

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

Wow! What site Karla, and I too hope it wins
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

Fantastic poem, I hope it wins!;-)
Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

You have us giggling! A very cute write, Killer!
love, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

Lols..Laughing at Ed's comments below...:)
I like plain old fashioned weetabix !
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, this title sounds so familiar, but I can't just place it...LOL! Hope you win the contest, as you already have the booby prize, that wonderful sister of yours...;) Ed

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

Got to love it!!

Love TINKA

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

Beautiful write Karla
I too am a diabetic, eat onlt "Cherios"
but not every day, like hot oatmeal too

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

your sense of humor is fantastic!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

I like it; I like it! But beware, Karla - old Ed Matlack is a notorious Cereal Killer, too - and when he hears about you - he won't be very Cheerio! He may also be checking your trash!!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

Being a fellow diabetic I can most assurdly relate to this and don't think it silly at all. Broome has a thought.

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

Your poem should be enlarged and plastered on the wall of every doctor's reception room. I'm not diabetic, but sugar does horrible things to my 'slightly'used body. This one is too true to be funny or hated. Thank you for getting it said. You, GO Poet! - Bill

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

lol
good for you
stay healty
this is adorable
pax lol A

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

Karen's pegged this one right, Karla. Thank you for the chuckle. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

This is as kewt as can be. You gave me a full smile this morning as I get ready for another day. Bless you for enriching our mornings around here!
Love and peace,
Susan

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

Karla~

Not stupid, just very original and cleverly penned! Enjoyed; thanks for the smiles this morning! As Jerry Bolton says, Gotta love it (and I do!)!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

Thanks for morning smile, as a diabetic I can sure relate to this one.

felix