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Another Soldier Dies
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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This came to me after reading Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie's "The Face of War."

Thanks also to Jerry.


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morning yawns awake; another
day; another soldier dies;
who gives a damn?  there are other
news stories to analyze;
terrorist attacks; price of fuel;
disasters; idols to watch;
rise in crime; reality's cruel; 
soldiers die; now pass the scotch;
the illegals invading; the
growing mistrust; we've lost sight
of what is important, you see;
i've my own battles to fight.
morning yawns awake; another
day; another soldier dies;
war's hell; tell that to the mothers
with tears streaming from their eyes.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


     

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Reviewed by Sherri Smith
Reviewed on April 27, 2006
This poem goes straight to my heart. It says it like it is, my type of poetry! Easy, simple to understand and tugs at the heart strings.

Reviewed on April 27, 2006
You expressed the terrible truth, the burden on so many shoulders, the fear of so many families in a wonderful way.
Love and Hugs, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on April 26, 2006
Karla,
This was written on the cheek of honesty and realism, with a hinted kiss of compassion and sensitivity.
We have done our best to desensitize ourselves from truth eversince this damn war began, leaving our own warriors out there alone, just because we are too blatantly selfish. When all is said and done...there really is no other problem we have, as important as making sure those guys and gals know we care, and appreciate their sacrifices.
Wonderful write Karla..Perfect!

ps: sending you a message.

Lisa

Reviewed on April 25, 2006
This is an excellent write here, sad but very true
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
There should be no wars, no killings, no abuse, no hatred, no back stabbing politics. Politicians make wars, and then tell us it is justified, for one reason or another, so they can send or young people to die in a foreign land, that did no wrong to them. My heart goes out to the families that are mourning their dead young soldiers, sent to fight something they really had no idea about. How many women and men have we lost to wars? Too many.



Another Soldier Dies is a tragic exercise in sadness and lamenting. These young soldiers will never again mow the lawn, hang out with their friends, watch a sports event, or have a family, because the government decreed they should die, and if they should come back alive, they are scarred for life of the trauma that will haunt them the rest of their lives.



Thanx Karla, but this did make me sad, angry and just down with tears for the inexcusable loss of life, because two governments could not agree whether it tastes great or is less filling. This is the abusrdity of war.



May the Lord Jesus bless all those called to war, for no other reason than politics. May the Lord Jesus bless the souls of the fallen, for they had no real say in where they went or who they had to kill in order to survive, only to come home in caskets, to the sad mourning to their family and friends. May the Lord Jesus please put an end to all wars for all time, because there is no real reason why the people of the earth cannot get along. May the Lord Jesus bless all of the families that have been stricken with grief, because their sons and daughters were killed in a foreign land they were told to go to. Amen.



With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & (((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie



"If I have to be tis girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
Excellent write Karla!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
So true and so much of a daily reality, even here in canada where we Have not seen any number of casualties of our own troops since the WW II as the tally of Canuck soldiers rises the sympathy seems to decrease.

Felix

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
Men and women are dying everywhere now and its not just the one's that are wearing the uniform and its not just one country, it is the whole world in different ways. What is war good for? As the song says absolutely nothing! I pray for peace and rise my glass to those that do their best.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
Outstanding writing Karla!

love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
Excellent Karla! I agree with all the others especially Broome and Peter! We need to pray more for the Lord to direct our president, Rumsfeld and all who plan are our strategy. We also should say daily prayers for all the military. We should all "put our prayers where our mouth is", to use an old adage...Thank you

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
After a time, unfortunately, any war becomes a bore...ed

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
I give a Damn! I give a God Damn! Our soldiers are in Iraq, because their Commander-in-Chief, our duly elected President, sent them over there to fight the bastards who had taken over a country to give support to the world movement futhering their brand of Islam. Oil, and all the popular issues are in the mix, but the US is trying to stem the tide of terrorism which produced 9-11. All the Damn liveral news media, notwithstanding, our soldiers are there to help establish a new Government in Iraq, one that, we hope, will stay democratic long enough to help us hold Iran off from becoming a necular power.

Yes, I give a Damn, but,I've seen service men die for all of my decades, and it will continue as long as the US is policemen to the whole world. If not the US, if not our soldiers, whose?

The old and tired Veteran of long ago - Bill





Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
Karla
Brave and courageous sacrifices have to be made by our soldiers in the face of an evil and impassive foe that seeks to enslave us all under their despotic rule, and impose their heathen beliefs on us..
God Bless America and Great Britain !
Love and Light
Peter

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
YES! There are other stories to cover by the whiners and cryers of America.

Reviewed on April 25, 2006
Karla,

Pretty damn sad when reality ignores the sacrifices made by our brave men and women who fight for our freedom. You capture it brutally and painfully! A powerfully moving write; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

God bless our troops, may those in battle return home soon!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
Karla,

This is a heart felt verse for our soldiers. Here in Macon we're welcoming the Mighty 48th back from Iraq. They had too neumerous of losses. My thoughts and prayers go out to all the others' as well as their families too.
Thank you.
Susan


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